Comments | lomonaaeren: Building With Worn-Out Tools, Chapter 16--Concerned Friends

lomonaaeren

Building With Worn-Out Tools, Chapter 16--Concerned Friends

Jul 04, 2007 09:26

Comments 17

aquila_star July 4 2007, 18:50:43 UTC

Pansy is way too observant and insightful. Bwahahaha

And it's about time Harry wrote that letter...he needs to tell his side, yk?

Nice.

lomonaaeren July 5 2007, 01:57:34 UTC

Isn't she? I do like writing her this way.

And yes, Harry does. He really should have done it a long time ago, but emotional isolation hasn't been good for him.

Thanks!

cheshyre May 6 2009, 03:41:40 UTC

Just discovered this story with your new Master Fic List.

Loving it -- Harry with Narcissa; Draco confronting Harry about how he interacts with Narcissa the next chapter/day

But this? What did Harry say that could be used against him by Blainevra...

I should be going to sleep (an hour ago) since I have work tomorrow, but I may yet read another chapter before bed.

calambre July 4 2007, 19:48:58 UTC

There seems to be trouble ahead, with Harry's cavalier attitude. Maybe he'll piss off Draco so much he'll drop the case in the middle of it, and Harry could be left adrift.

lomonaaeren July 5 2007, 01:57:45 UTC

I think Chapter 17 may surprise you.

syrinx59 July 4 2007, 19:58:15 UTC

wow, it' great... I like the fact that Harry stoped denying his feelings... well, at least physical...
ok, I know their relation is now based on attraction, but do you plan them to fall in love really hard? :D just asking... :)
but otherwise, great story...:) keep it up :)

lomonaaeren July 5 2007, 01:58:16 UTC

I really can't tell you that, or the story will be ruined! ;)

Let's just say that Harry has other feelings he has to stop denying.

star_faerie July 4 2007, 22:06:26 UTC

This was an interesting four(?) chapters- I was playing catch up, having not been able to get online since 23 June- and there seemed to be a lot going on. Part of me feels that Harry and Draco may get caught with their pants down, but I guess I will have to see. I loved your Pansy in this chapter, she was a very intriguing character. I cannot help but wonder what she did and what she's going to do to fix it- I hope we find out :)

lomonaaeren July 5 2007, 01:59:00 UTC

Yes, there is. And Harry and Draco will be caught if they don't start paying attention to something outside their own affairs soon- but then, Draco's pretty good at keeping his mind focused on business.

You find out what Pansy was up to in the next chapter.

nomeci July 4 2007, 22:46:33 UTC

ok - Pansy is thinking... nothing good can come from this! lol

lomonaaeren July 5 2007, 01:59:11 UTC

You'd be surprised. :)