i had to wait until it was done because i am not good with waiting for stuff and then i read it in one sitting - i could not even comment because i was to invested in the story it is marvelous! i enjoyed all the magical - runic - theory and how well versed harry was (well done you for knowing runes too!) and then the characterisation: harry is so perfect in the way you wrote him, and how he likes the way things is, also his acceptance at the beginning and then his reliance on the spell is well done and his reluctance to live without the protection and theo - your theo is always interesting but this one sparkles with something extra! and i like how he does not understand all that harry is saying, but he is trying, and if he really doesnt get it he tells harry that he is not a genious so speak simply! their relationship is so amusing, but also feels so true to the heart of both of them! and i like that in the end harry has a place he belongs this was really an interesting read and fascinating in its execution! well done you!
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and then i read it in one sitting - i could not even comment because i was to invested in the story
it is marvelous!
i enjoyed all the magical - runic - theory and how well versed harry was (well done you for knowing runes too!)
and then the characterisation: harry is so perfect in the way you wrote him, and how he likes the way things is, also his acceptance at the beginning and then his reliance on the spell is well done
and his reluctance to live without the protection
and theo - your theo is always interesting but this one sparkles with something extra!
and i like how he does not understand all that harry is saying, but he is trying, and if he really doesnt get it he tells harry that he is not a genious so speak simply!
their relationship is so amusing, but also feels so true to the heart of both of them!
and i like that in the end harry has a place he belongs
this was really an interesting read and fascinating in its execution! well done you!
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