Fiction: Jacket Battle - The Fantasy

[lollobrigida]

Title: The Fantasy
Author: Lollobrigida
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack and Juliet
Rating: NC-17 (sex and hotness abounds - children go away!)
Prompt: Juliet's Home
Word Count: 4237
Notes: Third fiction for the Jacket Battle, and as you guessed, it just keeps getting longer and longer. (thats what she said) I own nothing, Lost isn't mine, please don't

Comments

[lollobrigida]

Heee!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I had the notion of it swimming around my head all day yesterday to the point where I got home and was like OKAY I so know EXACTLY what they are doing tonight! I don't think I've ever gotten *this* behind a ship before. I mean I'm pro Gibson/Grace so very much so... but he kinda died in the finale which pissed me off. So getting on the bandwagon this early into it and this deep? Yeah I'm a goner pretty much.

There was a point in the fiction where I was going to have her ask him how he knew what her dreams had done to her? The part where he tells her what they did to her? "You'd wake up... Juliet, skin flush and on fire, wondering why your dreams were betraying you like that." That part? Was going to go a bit further in having him admit that he had the same dreams? But I liked it better that he just knew her that well instead, and less romantic comedy of them. I did however totally steal the WORST line in a romantic comedy ever. (wow this comment reply is getting long!) There is a line in The Wedding Date that made me GAG, where Dermot says to her, "I think I'd miss you even if I never knew you." and I HATED hearing him say it, because I'm sorry ONLY IN MOVIES do guys think to say things like that, but in my fiction Juliet said it to Jack... which to me made more sense coming from a woman anyway, but yeah.... OKAY!! Enough of the ramble, and onto plotting the next fiction... which is going to be??

Juliet and Jack catch up on Pop Culture Phenomenon.... and that is all I will say.

[ms_dollsome]

*nods* I enjoyed it immensely. And I know what you mean about getting so deep into a ship so early on. It's weird for me too, because usually I'm one of the last ones on the bandwagon and then *poof* the show gets canceled. (It's a pattern I hope is going to break with Jacket.)

And you know you're really into a ship when you download a widget that sits prettily on your desktop and lets you know anytime jacket_whoweare is updated. *cough*

I agree that it was better having him just know her that well, much more realistic of the characters. And I've seen The Wedding Date but I don't remember that line. Next time I catch it I'm going to have to pay close attention. :)

(This reply is also very long, but I blame you.)

Juliet and Jack catch up on Pop Culture Phenomenon.... and that is all I will say.
And I don't know you that well, so I'm hesitant to say this, but you're a tease!

*twiddles thumbs until the Pop Culture induced sex is posted*

[lollobrigida]

HAA oh dear I know the horrible torture of loving a show only to see it go off into the distance... Smith... The Inside.. now DayBreak.. which I only watched for Victoria Pratt.. but STILL!! They need to cut it out! Jacket should hopefully give me something good at least... or so I hope, and the beauty of this ship is that most the fans KNOW how insane it would be for this to end perfectly... it's not that whole insane banter about how Jate is Fate, which if i hear that one more time? I'm gonna start a Jate is Hate community... but Jacket is flawed and tormented and that's what we love about it... or at least that's what I love about it. It's about giving the characters their own choices, instead of saying OH well she's the lead female and he's the lead male so OF COURSE they belong together. I'm just glad JJ learned his lesson with Syd/Vaughn.. you don't put them together in the middle of the show because then they have nothing to struggle toward.

Yeah that line in the wedding date is when they are both on that huge bed in their room in like London? She's rambling on about herself and she goes, "I'm rambling... tell me about you." and he says something like "I'm allergic to dryer sheets I hate tuna and I think I'd miss you even if I never met you." and I go GAG!!!!!

Heeeee I am a HUGE tease I cut/pasted a snippet of this fiction to Laura last night while she waited for me to finish it. It was MEAN!!