Song Series; Music - Takaki x Chinen

Dec 18, 2008 11:57

He looks so young.

It hurts Takaki’s head - makes him feel old and dirty and sinful - but he counts the years and they aren’t that many; three, four maybe? He can’t remember sometimes (that makes him feel older too), not when he hears him call, Sensei, soft and shy and maybe teasing, he can’t tell as easily as he can when he’s reading his name ( Read more... )

fandom: hsj, pair: takachii, series: song, this be: drabble

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rabu_kitacchi December 18 2008, 14:13:12 UTC
*struggles from converting to Takaki/Chinen*
I never thought about teacher!Takaki and student!Chinen before. I felt innocent and seducing Chinen both at the same time. Wtf D

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lolelephants December 18 2008, 15:53:44 UTC
oh man, my Takachii always embarrasses me so. gah. still, it was one of the first pairings I ever shipped when I got into HSJ so there you go. School!AU was completely on the spur of the moment. I blame the song entirely. D:

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rabu_kitacchi December 18 2008, 20:29:15 UTC
Um, I re-read my comment and it sounds a bit weird. So let me rephrase, the Chinen in the fic was both innocent and seducing at the same time. Which is freaky, yet interesting. :D

Why does your takachii embarrass you? XD It's a good drabble!

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lolelephants December 19 2008, 04:11:30 UTC
ahh okay. I get it better now. XD I think I based him a bit off Lolita, because damn that chick was manipulative.

my Takachii isn't as well-written as my HikaYabu most of the time because the dynamics between Takaki and Chinen tend to be a bit weird (no one really knows who dominates in that relationship D:). I can't seem to get it right sometimes, so pardon them if they're a little off. XD thank you for reading nonetheless!

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lolelephants December 18 2008, 15:54:35 UTC
lol sokay, for some reason everyone finds this hilarious. my friend freaked out when she read it, so I'm getting used to the strange reactions. good that you like it? XD

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lolelephants December 20 2008, 08:48:30 UTC
and I love your icon. thank you so much for reading!

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knowmonsta December 23 2008, 23:29:36 UTC
*sighs* How cute. And it sounds so dirty saying that.

Chinen is so made of WIN. He's too adorable and yet manages to be completely sly by seducing his teacher. *cough*But it's Takaki so it wasn't that hard of a job*cough*

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lolelephants December 24 2008, 15:49:55 UTC
it's okay, I already felt dirty writing it. TABOO FTW.

Chinen seems innocent, but he probably knows more than all of Best combined. he's a crafty one for sure. ;D Takaki, on the other hand...

Hur. Thanks for reading!

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