[Marvel, Fiction] Mama's Boy

[lokissoldier]

Author: lokissoldier
Title: Mama’s Boy
Summary: Tony remembers his mother.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Howard/Fem!Loki
Warnings: Implied m!preg, gets a bit angsty towards the end
Word Count: 2,070
Disclaimer: I own nothing, this was just for fun.
Notes: My beta was MS Word, you’ve been warned. For norsekink prompt:

Comments

[anonymous]

This is really great! Tony's point of view was really believable, I'd love to see more if you expanded on it!

[lokissoldier]

Thank you! I've kind of had this idea about doing a sequel from Loki's PoV and in present day, but I'm on the fence.

[lita_of_jupiter]

beautiful... though I want Loki to be protective of his little boy...

He seemed like such a great mother and I bet Stane is in pain in Hel's realm now... trying to kill her little brother (and yes, in my head Loki's children like eachother and their parent)

[lokissoldier]

Thanks. I kind of wanted the angst factor with super villain Loki, so I made him not remember Tony. I think Odin had something to do with the change. It's always Odin's fault for some reason.

I think all of Tony's brothers and sisters have had a turn with Stane by now. (In my head, they're all a big happy family, too.)

[lita_of_jupiter]

its totally Odin's fault... when the memory MIB thingy fails he will remember Tony... and let there be ANGST!!

And family reunions... many of them!

write more pleasE?

[lokissoldier]

Haha, alright. You've talked me into it. Just because I want to write Tony's expression when he meets Sleipnir, his eight-legged horse brother.

[shingo_the_pest]

This is awesome! This is everything I wanted: an inhumanly beaufitul Loki, that everyone can kind of sense is different and otherworldly and too perfect. And you did Howard/Loki! I never would have expected that, and it kinda tickles me.

Do does Loki remember everything when he's attacking Earth during the Avengers? Now that I think about it, aside from mind control he never truly attacked Tony...

[lokissoldier]

Thanks! I really tried hard to include everything. It was a great prompt. As for the Howard/Loki, it kind of surprised me too when I began writing it.

Odin induced amnesia. I remembered he used it on Jane once in the comics and thought he might use it on Loki, just to keep everything canon. Though, that is a good point. He never did attack him directly and the mind control didn't work. Someone convinced me to write a follow-up, I'll have to keep this in mind. It would be interesting to explore.

[shingo_the_pest]

And Odin forcefully separated Jane & Donald/Thor... ooh, this is so good! I could totally see Odin stepping in to "end this nonsense" or however he felt about it. I was worried that Loki may have left because he felt that Howard and Tony didn't love him anymore.

And the "centuries" conversation. I loved the double layers to that!!!!! I was vibrating with "omg, TONY LISTEN TO THIS" glee because for Loki its literal, but Tony really has NO IDEA. (Which is what I wanted, I love it when the main character doesn't understand something but the audience does, and you kinda just want to shake the character and say OMG LOOK.)

Follow up? LJDSFLAKJDSLFK!!!! :D

[lokissoldier]

Haha, yeah, just what I thought, too! But, are you kidding? Loki simply LEAVE because he thought he was unloved? He'd plot, scheme, and stick around because he's a lost puppy.

Glad you liked that, it was my favorite scene to write. I don't know why, but I really love when characters hide secrets from the main characters. I feel it gives them more depth because they're not just blabbing everything to the main character for his own convenience.

^-^ Yeah. I hope you don't mind. It goes a bit off prompt with Tony actually finding out that Loki is his mother then recovering his memories then Loki freeing and introducing Tony to his brothers and sisters.

[arashiislove]

this is so good!
hope you do a sequel!

[lokissoldier]

Thank you!
I'll try my best!

[annakas]

OMG this was absolutely fabulous!
And yayy for Loki being Maria Stark!
I love it how everyone kind of just sensed that Maria was different otherworldly but they didn't notice it consciously.

Howard being a jerk is no surprise. He probably charmed Loki off his/hers feet with his big brain and charisma, was all LOOK GUYS MY WIFE TRUMPS ALL OF YOUR TROPHY WIVES AND SHE IS SMART!!!!! x eleven!, and then turned in to an insecure jerk because others actually noticed that Maria was hot. Typical of some men who are in to the Madonna whore complex. At first they are bragging to friends but when the relationship turns long term they get jealous as hell and blame the woman.

The scene with Loki and Tony dancing and talking was perfection. This so needs a sequel/s. More more more!

[lokissoldier]

Thank you so much!
I don't know what I like so much about Maria!Loki. It just kind of fits for some reason that I can't comprehend. Maybe it's because Tony's so pretty that he can only be the child of a god.

I think at one point, he really did love her then things just happened. Howard started to get more pressure at work, Loki was spending less time with him because she had to take care of Tony, and a thousand other things that just made them grow apart. I've found that some men really WANT kids but then get jealous of them because they leave it all up their wife and didn't realize how much time goes into taking care of them, leaving the wife with very little time to baby the husband like he wants.

Thank you! I'm working on it as we speak!