Patience

[lokifan]

Title: Patience
Word count: 1500
Characters/pairings: Harry/Draco
Summary: PWP. Harry has never been patient.
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often much nicer to them than she is.
Warnings: D/s
Authors Notes: Begun for dracoharry100’s challenge patience, yonks ago; completed at lavillanueva’s prompting, since otherwise I wouldn’t have written anything

Comments

[aldehyde]

o man. i love how bittersweet this is. i also like how you managed to fit in so much in such a short story. the last section was the most potent - the contrast between draco's and harry's perceptions of each other was striking.

[lokifan]

Thank you so much! Especially for this - i also like how you managed to fit in so much in such a short story. I'm usually pretty verbose so that is awesome to hear!

I'm glad you liked the ending, too. I love having them misunderstand each other. *is sadist*

[aldehyde]

I'm usually pretty verbose so that is awesome to hear!

eheh well i'm a sucker for UBER-LONG stories so for me to be so pleased with this one also speaks volumes in your favour ;)

ps:- i recced this on my journal recently :)

[lokifan]

ICON LOVE. And thanks so much for the rec! I'll go and check it out shortly. :DD

[salviag]

Oh, the ending...I hope you would consider a follow up, whether it's fluffy or angsty (or maybe both).

[lokifan]

Thanks for the comment! I don't know about a follow-up - ambiguous can be fun. *is evol*

[koishii_hime]

HAWT. *w*

But a lito sad. D: Seems like it will be a disaster, but I think they both want the same things. x) SO IT WILL END UP HAPPY. D< I will choose to believe that. :3

Anyways, :0 With Draco acting all adult-like but being innocent and child-like, with agressive!top!Harry really reminded me of Daisychain!Draco and stories like that. XD
<33 Very nice. :DD

[lokifan]

AHAHA ICON LOVE. Thank you v much, dahling.

And yes, choose to believe as you like, my sweet fluff lover! I should write some more of my smitten!Draco arc, now that I think about it - replying to a comment of yours has reminded me!

Thanks so much for the comment - having my porn compared to Aspen's is so glee-making, you have NO IDEA. Srsly. And I really enjoyed writing Draco this way, rather innocent and naive. Even though it makes me sad cos Harry is kind of taking out his issues on our ickle boy. *hugs him*

[koishii_hime]

xD YAY. <3 I am good at this reminding you to write thing. :D

♥ I totally have a soft spot for innocent and shy Draco. But yeah. D: Harryyy. BAD. *pushes him away from Draco and joins you in hugs*

[lokifan]

OMG. I'm sorry I fail so hard at on-time replying! I do appreciate your comment muchly. And yes, Harry should definitely treat Draco better. He is a bad boy for taking his issues out on Draco.

I haven't updated A Little Bonus yet, I must admit. *face of shame*

[enchanted_jae]

Oooh, harsh!Harry. That's both hot and a wee bit disturbing.

[lokifan]

He is v harsh in this one. *frowns at Harry for taking out his Issues on people*

Glad you found it hot, though. :D It's been a while since I posted smut, I wouldn't want to lose my powers!