Now That You're Helpless

[lokifan]

Title: Now That You’re Helpless
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2400
Characters/Pairings: Riley/Spike
Summary: PWP - rewritten version of that Into The Woods scene
Warnings: non-con
Disclaimer: The boys belong to Joss, even though I’m often nicer to them than he is.
Author’s Notes: A (late) entry for feed_my_kink’s random non-con challenge.

Comments

[danaid_luv]

*blinking* Wow. That was...harsh. But I didn't figure it'd be hearts & flowers between the two, y'know? Nicely done. Properly angsty. *sniffles & a weak grin*

*whispers* Shut up next time, Spike, okay? ;)

[lokifan]

That was...harsh. But I didn't figure it'd be hearts & flowers between the two, y'know? Nicely done. Properly angsty. *sniffles & a weak grin*

Aww! It was very harsh. Thanks for commenting. *offers a tissue*

I hope Spike takes your advice. Even if I know he won't.

[xenachakram12]

Whoa! That was rough. My stomach feels all oogy.

Good characterizations! I think Riley will probably feel bad about it soon, but he'll never apologize to the likes of Spike.

“No matter how hard you try, you’re never gonna match Angel.”

Ouch! That hurts... but Riley deserves it.

Nice job! :-)

[lokifan]

It was rough, wasn't it? Thanks for sticking with it!

I think Riley will probably feel bad about it soon, but he'll never apologize to the likes of Spike.

Oh, definitely. I think it'll hit him like a ton of bricks when it sinks in - much like Spike, he wanted to 'share the hurt around'.

[trepkos]

Oh!
That was nasty and painful to read.
Good job - but I hate to see them like this!

“No matter how hard you try, you’re never gonna match Angel.”

And blimey! Is Spike trying to get himself killed?

[lokifan]

Good job - but I hate to see them like this!

Thanks! I winced a little writing it - I like these boys to be in love! Or at least not being hideous to each other.

And blimey! Is Spike trying to get himself killed?

Hee. You know what that boy's like! Keeping his mouth shut is not one of his special talents.

[trepkos]

How did your exams go BTW?

[lokifan]

Um... well, I think. Results on August 16th! *bites nails* And that reminds me! I have all that fic by you, waiting for me! *glee*

[lokifan]

:d Thank you so much! Especially for reading it when you don't know the fandom. One pertinent fact: Spike the vampire has been chipped, making him defenceless against any human. Eg Riley.

[sueworld2003]

Oh that was dark, (just how I like it of course) but just excellent!

[lokifan]

Dark is fun! Thanks for the comment.