Unforgivable

[lokifan]

Sometimes, a girl’s in the mood to write fluff. Pink, sweet fluff about happy boys having kissy sex and comical misadventures.

Other times, she isn’t.

Title: Unforgivable
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~8200
Characters/Pairings: Ron/Draco
Summary: Draco has been accepted by everyone but Ron as they attempt to rebuild Hogwarts. He makes an agreement

Comments

[k8matty]

Warnings: dub-con, humiliation, whipping, object insertion, birching, forced blowjob, gagging, forced orgasm. Didn’t realise that was quite such a long list...

You had me at your summary, and once I got to the actual fic.... *face explodes*

This was sterling, hot and evil and very clever. Congratulations, you win.

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[lokifan]

You had me at your summary

*grins* 'Warnings' is so not the right word, is it?

Thank you so much for the comment! Especially the 'clever' - hot and evil is usually enough for me but I definitely wrote some other stuff into this one, and I'm so glad it was seen!

[redsnake05]

Well, that managed to hit every filthy fandom kink I own. Delicious. I love the wonderful moment of uncertainty at the very end, when the reader realises that this might not be the end. I can just about see Ron's lips moving, and have no idea if I want him to say 'yes' or 'no'. I loved how you described Malfoy's pain, the physical and mental aspects of his humiliation and punishment. Thank you so much for sharing.

[lokifan]

that managed to hit every filthy fandom kink I own. Delicious.

Dirtybadwrong kink is my special favourite.

I love the wonderful moment of uncertainty at the very end, when the reader realises that this might not be the end. I can just about see Ron's lips moving, and have no idea if I want him to say 'yes' or 'no'.

I knew I wanted to end it that way from the beginning - partly because it's a moment when Ron realises his behaviour is unforgivable too. But yeah, the open ending is fun. Anything could happen.

Thanks for commenting!

[sunsets_shadows]

Where did I find you...? I don't remember, but this fic makes it worth it. God this was amazing. *looks through your journal in hopes of more fun stuff*

[lokifan]

Where did I find you...? I don't remember

Same. *frown* I know I've seen your work somewhere, but...

Oh! I know. hd500!

I'm so glad you liked it so much! Hope you find some fun stuff. The real kink is mostly for the Buffy fandom, but I have some plans. *evil grin*

[maddiec24]

Aww, damn! That is *hot*. I loved it. Draco suffers so beautifully.

[lokifan]

Thanks! He really does, doesn't he?

[lokifan]

*friends back*

Thanks! I keep meaning to friend you, actually - I've read your work before and loved it - so now I'm flattered again.

[lokifan]

Thank you so much! *purrs* Coming up with fitting punishments for those canon moments was lots of fun...