A Bad Influence

[lokifan]

Title: A Bad Influence
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 5400
Characters/Pairings: Harry/Draco
Summary: Al and Scorpius are going off the rails, and Harry and Draco both blame the influence of the other man’s son. Now the question is, what are they going to do about it?
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often nicer to them than she is.

Comments

[snoringolder]

This is excellent! I very much appreciate how you managed to keep the characters' interactions dad-like and sill sexy. They are, for sure, DILFs. :).

You have an awesome sense of wit, and movement through the story! I very much enjoyed.

[lokifan]

you managed to keep the characters' interactions dad-like and sill sexy

Thanks! I was wondering about that - I mean at first they're way more focused on their sons than each other, which makes sense but is kind of lacking in Teh Sexy. So that's really good to hear.

You have an awesome sense of wit, and movement through the story!

:dd Thanks for the comment!

[maya231]

Lovely! :)

[lokifan]

Aww, thank you!

[koishii_hime]

Haha! I loved this. How Harry and Draco are trying to be good dads, but they're just like grown-up versions of their sons even now. x) And how everyone teases Draco about being gay, and the ghostie!Bear. :DDD

[lokifan]

How Harry and Draco are trying to be good dads, but they're just like grown-up versions of their sons even now.

:d Yeah, quite. They try so hard, but they're v immature around each other!

the ghostie!Bear

The ghostie!Bear is entirely real! Honest.

[beatnikspinster]

Funny story! I love Albus and Scorpius as "rebel youth". The father and son relationships were tender and amusing. :)

[lokifan]

I love Albus and Scorpius as "rebel youth".

Me too! I had lots of fun writing Harry and Draco's reactions. I'm glad you liked the father-son relationships too, I liked them and I didn't want them to get submerged under Albus-and-Scorpius and Harry-and-Draco.

[ghighines]

This was lovely, I could really see Albus Severus and Scorpius "bad ass" style. And Harry and Draco were just great together, the amusing flirting got an extra bonus.

But
please i want to know what did they mean with this line

“Time to go Creevey on their arses.”

You know, i have a very "active" mind and it really scared me what my mind delivered.

*stares in the air horrified"

Lovely story,as always, you had me loving it from the beginning to the end.

Thanks for sharing.

[lokifan]

You know, i have a very "active" mind and it really scared me what my mind delivered.

AHAHA. I will not tell! I much prefer to watch you freak out as you consider the possibilites.

Lovely story,as always, you had me loving it from the beginning to the end.

Aww! Thank you very much.