The More Things Change

[lokifan]

Title: The More Things Change
Author: Lokifan
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 5200
Characters/Pairings: Harry/Draco
Summary: Hogwarts graduation night, and Draco escapes to the top of the Astronomy Tower.
Disclaimer: The boys belong to JKR, even though I’m often nicer to them than she is.
Author’s Notes: This is a belated birthday fic for the talented tweeney. The

Comments

[lavillanueva]

Uh, I, um....

Wow. This was so freaking hot, I was holding my breath through half of it. I love how excited Draco was at the prospect of fucking Harry, and how the sight of Harry on his knees took his breath away. And I was in love with Harry telling Draco to stop fingering him or he'd come. And how protective Draco was. And- oh hell, I loved everything!

[lokifan]

This was so freaking hot, I was holding my breath through half of it

EXACTLY my reaction to seriously hot fic, so this makes me very happy!

oh hell, I loved everything!

*glomps* Yay!

*cracks whip* No more romance - get back to the orgasm denial!

[lilithilien]

So very lovely! The smut was sizzling (there's just not enough top!Draco out there!) but the cuddling under the stars made me melt completely.

[lokifan]

:d Thanks! I loved writing the cuddling under the stars - I never do romance - and I'm really pleased you liked it.

there's just not enough top!Draco out there!

Definitely.

[enchanted_jae]

This was so wonderful and descriptive and I envy your beautiful, breathtaking imagery. All that, and hot sex, too. Goodness!

[lokifan]

Aww, thank you!

I envy your beautiful, breathtaking imagery

*does the dance of Writerly Validation* Thank you so much!

[ghighines]

This was omg fantastic

I loved every part of it soo good, especially this line

"it was ridiculous to feel shy after such very good sex"

That had me laughing.
Don't worry it's your first time you can feel anything you want *pats harry on his head*

[lokifan]

Thank you so much! What a great comment. Hi new friend! *waves*

Don't worry it's your first time you can feel anything you want *pats harry on his head*

Aww, thank you for reassuring virgin!Harry.

[ghighines]

Hello to you new friend,

yep harry needs some reassurance, we all know how he get's.

I've already told you that i like your fic :D.

No problem. i'll say it again.

[alaana_fair]

Mmm... that was just all kinds of lovely!

[lokifan]

Thanks! :d