"T is for Time" for Jacob Carter Alphabet Soup

[lokei]

T is for Time
by Lokei
Universe: Stargate SG1, gen
Author's note: Written for the Jacob Carter Alphabet Soup.

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Comments

[chocolatekettle]

A lovely insight into Jacob, and Selmak. Well done!

[lokei]

Thanks! I had a tough time with this one--Jacob's pov does not come easily to me!

[rdamel]

Very good. Thank you for sharing.

Melissa M.

[lokei]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

[sg_fignewton]

On, this is great - snapshots in time (if you'll pardon the pun) that are just great. I love the glances at the clock in the first two, and the absence of timepieces in the second, when Selmac offers him time in the greatest meaning of the word: a future.

Really lovely stuff, Lokei!

[lokei]

I like trying to treat some of my shortest stuff more like poetry--hence the symbolism you were so quick to find. :) Thanks!

[sg_betty]

I really like the way you show each of the most life changing moments of Jacob's life that are beyond his control, and then the last one, where now he has the time/chance to change his life himself. Very nice!

[lokei]

Thanks, I had a lot of fun with it, if fun is the right word. :)

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[amberflyant]

A very clever study of Jacob's complex personality. Well done, very enjoyable.

Re: feedback

[lokei]

Thanks! Really, all the alphabet soup entries have been fascinating so far.