William Bush Alphabet Soup

Apr 17, 2009 21:54

For those of you who are ahead of me in the timezones, I'm posting this a bit early.  Also, I have to work tomorrow (boo, hiss!) so I wanted to make sure the entry post got started before I have to go manage the museum all day.  There are also some random unclaimed letters, so if you're feeling inspired to fill them in over the course of the day, I ( Read more... )

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W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 18 2009, 02:37:02 UTC
W is for ‘What’s in a Name?’
by Lokei

His sisters tossed it about as carelessly as a child’s toy, often with the sweet endearments of childhood attached. It didn’t matter whether they sprinkled it through their wholesome conversation on his infrequent visits, or whether it peppered their chatty letters, which they would store up for weeks and apparently mail all at once so that months of no word at all would be broken by a mail packet several inches thick that was the envy of many a homesick middie. Though he was not a great reader, nor they particularly accomplished correspondents, he took great pleasure in sitting in a sunny patch of quarterdeck to read them. And though he took care never to let his attention stray too far from the activity on deck, his lips occasionally quirked as he ran across a particularly entertaining story, only to vanish when it was necessary to employ his quarterdeck bellow, and become the fearsome Mr. Bush once more.

And he was good at it, and knew it. Mr. Bush was a proper sailor, respected, admired, and occasionally feared by the common sailor, the rawest wet-behind-the-ears recruit, and even the old salt. He had sailed with some of the best, and his fellow officers were perfectly happy to give him the honors he had earned, however uncomfortable he was to receive them. Some ships, some berths, had been worse than others in that respect-even the merest casual mention of Renown or its officers could make his temper as short as his captain’s-the effusive praise he had been given by the unlamented Captain Sawyer had been too pointed to be at all honest. It had taken him not long at all to see that he was being raised so that others might perceive themselves lowered, and Bush stood with that not one whit. If he was to be at the mercy of the mercurial tempers of both winds and captains, Bush greatly preferred the captain of the present.

There was no doubt that Captain Hornblower set the tone for the rest of the ship: if he called his first lieutenant “Mr. Bush” without fail, despite their long service together, and addressed the other officers with equal formality, then that formality carried over to the relationships between the lieutenants as well, as it should. Bush rather approved: too lax behavior among the lower ranks of officers could lead to sloppiness in the men, and by extension poor performance in times of dire need. For the sake of one of Hornblower’s brilliant plans carried out with mechanical precision, Bush was willing to “Mister” whomever the captain pleased.

But at the end of the day, at the end of a good day, a truly good one, there was nothing in the world which Bush liked better-not pineapples, not a stiff breeze after a calm, not fresh orders from the Admiralty, nor a fine meal with mustard and ale-nothing in the world he liked better than to bring the captain his evening report and have Hornblower look up at him with the slightest hint of a smile. On such a day the captain would loosen his cuffs and cravat, lean back in his chair, and say, “Come in-and do shut the door, William.”

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" mylodon April 18 2009, 12:01:47 UTC
That's a great way to kick off this Bush-fest.

Last sentence is the best, of course. :)

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 18 2009, 13:56:43 UTC
*grin* I love fics that start in my head with a last line. Then I have to work back and figure out how the hell I got there. *laugh* Glad you enjoyed it!

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" black_hound April 18 2009, 21:57:40 UTC
*seconds that last line*

I am so enjoying all the fic. Thank you so very very much for organizing all the fun.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 18 2009, 22:41:09 UTC
So glad people are having fun with it. I myself am extremely pleased with all the fun so far.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" brewsternorth April 18 2009, 23:13:21 UTC
It's introduced so much fun-that-is-funny to the HH fandom, it's amazing!

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 19 2009, 00:12:18 UTC
And extremely surprising to me, as I had not thought there was much that was all that funny about William Bush. I am glad to be proved wrong.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" romanticalgirl April 19 2009, 15:01:05 UTC
Excellent as always, and I can just see Hornblower at the last - especially that smile.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 19 2009, 15:32:09 UTC
Thank you! I actually find Bush terribly difficult to write, so I'm glad you liked it. Hornblower, on the other hand, comes very naturally. I don't want to think about what that says about me. :P

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" thehappyreturn April 22 2009, 08:27:42 UTC
Such great characterisation. Just right - how he quickly works out Sawyer's politics and has no truck with them, and the GREAT BIG GROWLING LIEUTENANT who likes nothing more than curling up at the feet of his master being called William by his captain. Oh, Oh. If the ficathon is starting this well, I don't think I'm going to have any heart left by the end of it. It'll just be in little exploded pieces all over my hotel room.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 22 2009, 11:16:30 UTC
Thanks! I really had fun with this particular entry, and I've been absolutely loving all the entries we've gotten to this challenge.

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" princess_s April 22 2009, 12:03:00 UTC
I love this piece, the way they use their given names to signify something important, it gives me a warm glow on the inside :)

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 22 2009, 15:13:32 UTC
Thanks!

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" idler_1814 April 23 2009, 11:19:04 UTC
Delightful! I particularly liked this: ....his lips occasionally quirked as he ran across a particularly entertaining story, only to vanish when it was necessary to employ his quarterdeck bellow, and become the fearsome Mr. Bush once more.

So it's not only Hornblower who acts a part, hmmm?

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Re: W is for "What's in a Name?" lokei April 25 2009, 13:41:57 UTC
Thanks! Surely all officers must act a part, to one degree or another? Seems an almost inescapable part of management.

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