An Angel in Citadel
I've had a few ideas rumbling around in my head about DEMON for a little while now. I'm still working on WAR STORIES, but there's definately a few stories I'd like to tell that don't fit so neatly into the timeline. This is one of them. I've been fooling around mentally for a while with the concept of a story that involves Argen and a theater, and
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technically, if you are "fair," can you also have dark hair? or did you mean fair like pretty, not light colored? (i know thats nit picky :P)
also- we know she's pretty, already! :P i feel a little beaten over the head by the descriptions of Isabella.
nice detail about the queen's dress. (way to rhyme green with queen to create a melodious sentence, oh look out its new criticism)
the phrase "i mean, seriously dad" sounds out of place.
i love that you name other cities, and a little of what they are like, its starting to flesh out the geography of this world.
AWESOME reference to demon, i lOVE the subtlety!!! yay!!!
keep it up, doing great!
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