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Fic: Doctoring the Results (Donna/Martha)

Oct 14, 2008 08:28

Title: Doctoring the Results
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing: Donna/Martha
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,159
Spoilers: Through the Season 4 Finale
Author: lodessa
Author's Notes:: Written for vanitashaze for the dw_femslash ficathon. Apologies for the lateness.

( This was a hard place, clawing your way up the ranks would take nerves of steel. And you could see it, under the soft skin and shiny hair, there was something hard about Martha Jones, strong but cruel, like scar tissue. )

fic, dr. who

Comments 6

sophia_helix October 14 2008, 17:51:23 UTC

This came out great! I especially love how it picks up speed and whoosh -- Donna's totally the Doctor-Donna. Her dialogue is really good too. ALSO YAY END.

lodessa October 14 2008, 20:48:04 UTC

Thanks. I wasn't sure how to do the transition... but once the Doctor-Donna showed up there was no way of slowing things down. Because her brain moves too quickly.

Also was totally stressed about her dialogue because it is so distinctive and what with the never having written her before.

padawanpooh October 14 2008, 19:33:35 UTC

Lovely story - great character dynamics and bonus devastatingly!charming!Jack ;-)

lodessa October 14 2008, 20:48:49 UTC

Thank you (and yes, he sneaks into even my femslash ficathon fic apparently)

kattahj October 15 2008, 04:59:51 UTC

Nice. I like your way of writing the Doctor-Donna; it's not an easy feat.

lodessa October 25 2008, 16:29:45 UTC

Thank you. She is indeed a tricky one to write.