Comments | lodessa: Fic: To Hold (Martha/Ten, Martha/Tom)

lodessa

Fic: To Hold (Martha/Ten, Martha/Tom) - PORN

Sep 10, 2008 12:11

Title: To Hold
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Martha/Ten, Martha/Tom
Word Count: 2,690
Summary: Martha is still haunted by her feelings for Ten and confused as to what bearing this has on her engagement to Tom. About two steps from PWP, this was written for the porn.

( Logically, Martha knew that the shivers down her spine at his kiss were more about anticipation and the way she'd been pressed up against him for the last hour than the actual kissing. )

fic, dr. who

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voicegrl September 10 2008, 22:36:56 UTC

but she loves him enough to not make his decisions for him. She is not some lonely god.

That line was so perfectly done! I love Tom. I think he's just wonderful. And poor Martha.

lodessa September 10 2008, 22:49:38 UTC

Thank you. I really like Tom myself, which is what makes it so bitter that poor Martha is never going to be completely free of the past and the Doctor.

voicegrl September 11 2008, 00:05:59 UTC

Yeah, it's pretty sad. Both Tom and Martha deserve better!

lodessa September 11 2008, 14:31:13 UTC

They really do. Every time I try and write something happy for them it keeps turning out bittersweet, though.

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utopia83 September 11 2008, 09:23:52 UTC

*LOVES*

lodessa September 11 2008, 14:33:42 UTC

Thank you, my dear.

I was worried that everyone would hate it on account of my portraying Ten as a less than perfect lover... but I just can't help adding realism in sometimes.

utopia83 September 11 2008, 14:43:13 UTC

*shrug*

No one is perfect. Also, I love realism.

I know you can't stand Supernatural, but I'd like your help with the Jenny side of Dean/Jenny. I need to make that as realistic as possible, and I promise not to shove the Winchester down your throat.

lodessa September 11 2008, 14:49:50 UTC

There are certain characters that the fangirls do not like to see realism about. One time I wrote about Spike having performance issues and it was like I had said that puppies were not cute or fuzzy and then killed one.

I love realism myself though. Perfection is boring.

I will certainly help you with the Jenny side, because I like her and I like you. I will just pretend the guy is someone else.

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radiantbaby September 12 2008, 09:59:05 UTC

This was just...wow! Absolutely wow!

Such beautiful imagery and writing, such spot-on characterizations, such an interesting dichotomy between lacklaster and wonderful sex...

Wow!

lodessa September 12 2008, 14:15:33 UTC

Thank you.

I'm really glad the characterization and everything else worked for you. I tried to be as true as possible to what's canon, even if sometimes that meant as less appealing manifestation.

It's always a gamble writing less than idealized sex, but I tend to think it's worth it for the realism and character/relationship illustration it can provide.

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lodessa September 25 2008, 16:35:49 UTC

Thank you!