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loco_lobo

All in the Family

Aug 17, 2007 11:02

All in the Family

Chapter 8
Chapter Wordcount: 2059

Somewhere in Rayne’s hazy mind she heard the knock on the door ( Read more... )

supernatural fic

Comments 5

mrsericszmanda March 10 2008, 21:48:16 UTC

WOW!
This fic of yours is pretty hot!

I adore stories in which the Winchester travel with a girl and kinda share it.
At first I was a little disappointed, because Rayne was Deans girlfriend, but then everything turned out to become like in my wildest dreams.
Bonus points for the length!

Thanks a lot for posting it. <3

Maybe I'll find some more stuff like that here...?

loco_lobo March 10 2008, 22:41:17 UTC

yay!! *blushes*
yea, I *think* I said in the authors note...this was supposed to be a shameless PWP and somehow turned into this *points* but it was a lot of fun
...and umm sorry no lol, this is prolly the kinky-est thing I've done haha

mrsericszmanda March 10 2008, 22:45:05 UTC

As I said, reading was also a lot of fun.

Maybe the satisfied readers should encourage you to keep up the good work...

Anyways, I think I MUST read your other stories.

<3

loco_lobo March 10 2008, 23:45:33 UTC

aww *huggles* lol

be warned thou, some of my old shit sucks...and not in the good way lmao

soymaid May 8 2009, 10:30:48 UTC

Hey, thanks for linking your story. I very much liked it even though I had a few issues with it -- mostly, that Rayne threatened MarySuedom at times (but never actually was one), and I would've liked a stronger voice from the brothers, just a bit more in your characterization (because it is interesting, and weirdly plausible).

Oddly enough I ended up answering my own prompt (of course, mine's only 750 words) because I realized that what I most wanted was pretty specific and fleshed-out. But I very much enjoyed this.

(If you're curious, mine's at http://soymaid.livejournal.com/ obviously.)