So, I know next to nothing about Torchwood, but you managed to convey enough about this character that I was not only interested in his story regardless of Eliot, but felt like I got a real sense of his personality. Which, imo, is pretty darned impressive in such a short piece. So you're awesome (as always)! ^_~
And the Leverage-y bits are marvelous as well, of course. Hee, they're all so possessive/protective. XD
I'm so glad it was readable without prior knowledge. Was it possible to follow the time-travel discussion? I'm curious how many people worked out what would have happened if the baby had been born as he was supposed to be.
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And the Leverage-y bits are marvelous as well, of course. Hee, they're all so possessive/protective. XD
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Thanks for the review :D
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also, little beta help:
his metaphorically desk
it should be metaphorical... you're looking for an adjective, not an adverb :)
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Thanks so much for picking up that typo, I'll fix it asap.
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