Fic!

[llassah]

This is for kanzenhanzai , on the glooooorious occasion of her birthday.

It's 870 words, with RayK/OFC, RayK/Fraser, and it's rated PG. Enjoy!

Five Unexpected Moments Kowalksi Actually Expected (but Fraser Didn't)"

Comments

[meresy]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥!!

Ray! With his instincts! Boys! *hearts*

[luzula]

The impostor Mountie assassin could've been a whole fic. I love this:

For a split second, he looks furious, deadly, with a resolve that scares the shit out of Ray, then he’s back to looking concerned and helping Ray arrest the guy.

Also the kiss. Just beautiful. *happy sigh*

[julia_here]

Oh, entirely excellent. Love Ray not telling Fraser everything he knows, and the whole ambiguity with the Office Supplies rep.

And very much love Ray noticing the scuffed boot.

JUlia, also? your link at the noticeboard is broken, sorry to say.

[akite]

Every time he does that, though, he sort of slides off of the argument, gets too angry, and Fraser becomes distant and polite and it gets real unfriendly until the next time one of them dies.

I hope you meant next time one of them almost dies. *g* Because in my mind they are very much alive and kissing, whether it be in Canada or Chicago, or half and half. Lovely story. I sort of feel sorry for the office supplies rep, though.

[llassah]

well, it *is* a zombie fic! (thank you so much for the heads up, I completely missed that!) And thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I feel sorry for her too, but she ends up happy, I'm sure (she has to, everyone in my stories does)

[springwoof]

lovely! the impostor Mountie was genius, and the kiss at the end, romantic and perfect...