Ok, before I go off in a direction you don't find helpful, I have a serious question. Do you want exclusively praise on the things I liked about the story, or would you also like constructive criticism? Let me emphasize there is nothing wrong with just wanting positive feedback, and I can do that. But I've also done a fair bit of editing, and I tend to pay attention to word choice and phrasing, and there are some suggestions I would make. But you by no means have to hear them if you don't want to.
That said, it's a sweet story, and I like the odd trivia non sequitur at the end.
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That said, it's a sweet story, and I like the odd trivia non sequitur at the end.
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