I'll comment on the format of your story first. It's different from the "traditional" way. Not that it's a bad thing, far from it. Given how the context is brought up, the most different formats of the story can only make them more interesting. My teacher back at the Fiction class had told us this. A writer is not bound by the standards. We're talking creative writing here, so anything that challenges both you and the reader, in a good way, is a good thing. You don't have to necessarily follow the rules. If necessary, break them. But make it good (you know how there are stories out there where they "break the rules" but ends up in a load of crap).
I think you got that part right, so while at first glance, it merely looks like a list stating those random facts, if you take a closer read, I can see that you are, in the so-said unorthodox way, narrating a story. I liked it
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yeah, it's written as kind of a list meme...that's the only reason.
Yes, no one, muggle or wizard can resist the awesome power of Mickey Mouse...yes, Space Mountain is a roller coaster, one of the best ones they have at Disney...yes, even Cedric has gone, and so must you!
Thank you!! to me, the cedric character seemed kind of lonely without his siblings, you know? I felt it added more to the character...I was very diligent about try to weave them into canon.
OMG! I didn't notice that until you pointed it out! nice looking. I get what you mean though. I guess it was kind of a resolution for his brother.
Thank you! and I know you'll like it, because my next one, in the same fashion as this, is a Cedric/Hermione! Later!
thanks! since it didn't say he did have or didn't have siblings in any canon that I could find, I thought to give him them. Maybe he's lonley without them...he always seemed a little quiet. but many thanks for your feeback!
well with 18, I see Cedric as someone who isn't always so confident in his abilities and doesn't feel the need to prove himself to other people. But that's just me.
But (and stressing I still like 18, and its perspective) I think that people who aren't confident in their abilities tend to want to prove themselves to others, even if they shy away from doing so. It's people who are confident (even if they are confident in their mediocrity ~g~) who don't feel the need to prove themselves.
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I'll comment on the format of your story first. It's different from the "traditional" way. Not that it's a bad thing, far from it. Given how the context is brought up, the most different formats of the story can only make them more interesting. My teacher back at the Fiction class had told us this. A writer is not bound by the standards. We're talking creative writing here, so anything that challenges both you and the reader, in a good way, is a good thing. You don't have to necessarily follow the rules. If necessary, break them. But make it good (you know how there are stories out there where they "break the rules" but ends up in a load of crap).
I think you got that part right, so while at first glance, it merely looks like a list stating those random facts, if you take a closer read, I can see that you are, in the so-said unorthodox way, narrating a story. I liked it ( ... )
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Yes, no one, muggle or wizard can resist the awesome power of Mickey Mouse...yes, Space Mountain is a roller coaster, one of the best ones they have at Disney...yes, even Cedric has gone, and so must you!
Thank you!! to me, the cedric character seemed kind of lonely without his siblings, you know? I felt it added more to the character...I was very diligent about try to weave them into canon.
OMG! I didn't notice that until you pointed it out! nice looking. I get what you mean though. I guess it was kind of a resolution for his brother.
Thank you! and I know you'll like it, because my next one, in the same fashion as this, is a Cedric/Hermione! Later!
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I especially like 14 (that his best subject isn't his favorite) and 15 (that he beats himself up for something that isn't his fault.
I'm not sure I agree with 18 (is Cedric really that self-effacing?), but I like it.
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well with 18, I see Cedric as someone who isn't always so confident in his abilities and doesn't feel the need to prove himself to other people. But that's just me.
--Lauren
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