Comments | ljs_lj: FIC: "Jack O'Neill Does Not Believe" (1/1)

ljs_lj

FIC: "Jack O'Neill Does Not Believe" (1/1)

Feb 15, 2004 00:43

5000 words that came out of nowhere...

( Jack O’Neill Does Not Believe )

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Re: ljs_lj February 16 2004, 00:27:50 UTC

Thanks! *blush*

--LJ

silvertrek February 16 2004, 20:20:19 UTC

Ooh!! Great story!

nice! anonymous February 16 2004, 22:30:26 UTC

This is pretty good. I like the prophetic dreams.

Are you going to write a sequel that has him actually coming to terms with his abilities? and show his intelligence more? That would be really cool if you did. (HINT!)

Thank you for posting this to the new SmartJack list, I for one really enjoyed reading it.

Candy-Dawn

J O'N Does Not Believe anonymous February 17 2004, 03:31:37 UTC

Excellent story. Solid writing with good imagery. The root beer can that never gets touched is an especially nice touch. Liked the little details such as the Andrew Sisters and Cu Chullain. And the kleenex box tie-in was cute. Oh, and definitely liked the Jack O'N. vs. Col. O'N. Good job of capturing the character of Jack. What else can I read by you?

mog (long 'o')
m.mogavero@comcast.net

celli February 17 2004, 04:12:13 UTC

Wow, this is great. This is my favorite bit:

Truth to be told, he was jealous of Daniel.

In that moment, Jack O’Neill stopped wanting to die.

Just...wow.