need some fresh eyes

[ljgeoff]

Would anyone be interested in looking at a short that I'm working on? I had someone look at it at Sisseton, and she really liked it -- it's Native themed, and I had some poser worries, but I guess it flies. Anyways, one thing she said is that she'd like to see more of it -- expand it some, and I'm just drawing a blank.

Someone wanna prod it with a stick so that maybe I can see it in a new light?