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xythelle July 11 2009, 15:45:08 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this! Your dialogue was really funny and engaging and the conversation with Chad about the "She-Lions" had me in fits of laughter. I was laughing so hard in fact, that my twelve year old Labrador Miles, who was sound asleep up until that point was jolted awake by my giggles and seemed very concerned about why his mum was nearly falling out of bed laughing.

Lap + Laptop + 30kg Concerned Labrador = Chaos

But seriously, great story! Thanks for writing it =).

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lizzywinks July 12 2009, 00:50:41 UTC
Lol! I'm glad it made you laugh, but sorry the result was being crushed under your dog! At least you know if there was ever any danger, he'd be ready to spring into action. Um, and squash you. :)

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the story, and I hope both you and your laptop make a speedy recovery. ;)

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xythelle July 12 2009, 14:00:24 UTC
Yeah tis all good, the laptop (Lucy, I know I am weird and have named my puter) and I have escaped unscathed! =)

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lizzywinks July 13 2009, 19:39:56 UTC
Hee, I love my laptop, but not to the extent I've named it. I did call my first car Strangely though, so I can't really judge. ;)

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mangacat201 July 18 2009, 21:38:39 UTC
Now that went... complicated... very complicated. DAMN... that's gonna bust right open, I just know it.
Cat

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lizzywinks July 19 2009, 20:19:04 UTC
I didn't want to make things too easy. ;)

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tehopheliac August 4 2009, 01:08:40 UTC
Oh god. high!Jensen is so cute in this chapter. >w< *beams* :D I love it so much. You had me cracking up throughout most of it. <3

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lizzywinks August 5 2009, 22:11:01 UTC
Hee - he was sort of sweet and it's always really nice to hear if the humour worked. I'm very easily amused so it's hard to judge! ;)

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sandymg January 25 2010, 20:22:54 UTC
High Jensen is a thing of beauty. Loved it.

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lizzywinks January 26 2010, 22:36:13 UTC
He definitely is - high or not! ;)

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