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lizzywinks

J2 Big Bang Fic: Hewitched Part 6

Aug 03, 2011 23:01

( Part six )

big bang 2011, j2, the fic what i wrote

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lizzywinks August 8 2011, 23:52:48 UTC

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed! I remember watching repeats as a kid, too--it seems like it was on a lot back then, but I can't recall seeing it for ages. Shame. Yep, Danneel was very sneak, but Jared definitely deserved it. ;p

z3s_keep_going August 6 2011, 07:12:03 UTC

hahahahahaha loved this ;D i almost died while reading Danneel's trick because it was so funny!

lizzywinks August 8 2011, 23:55:45 UTC

Hee, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

giandujakiss August 6 2011, 07:15:06 UTC

This was so much fun! Loved how you ended it :-).

lizzywinks August 8 2011, 23:56:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it worked for you. :)

tuckercat2 August 6 2011, 08:22:33 UTC

I love this. I smiled and smiled some more. Thanks for sharing!

lizzywinks August 8 2011, 23:57:04 UTC

Aww, that's lovely to hear - thanks for letting me know. :D

blackcat333_99 August 6 2011, 09:38:37 UTC

This was such a fun and adorable read. I liked how Jared wasn't just this perfect person, he really was a bit spoiled and oblivious, but you also provided just enough background info that we could understand why without feeling beaten over the head with his history and reasons. Kudos! I honestly was initially surprised when it was Daneel that was cast as Samantha but then it made such perfect sense and the characterizations were so easy to get on board with. Jared's POV was very sympathetic, from his confused eagerness to spend more time with Jensen and creating excuses to make this happen, to his freak-out at discovering the truth about Jensen. Jensen was more of a cipher but that felt right, because this was told from Jared's POV, so of course we were seeing things from his eyes. I really enjoyed! Especially enjoyed Daneel's sense of humor and final way of testing Jared to see what he would really commit to.

lizzywinks August 9 2011, 00:07:08 UTC

I did consider having Jensen playing the Samantha role, but I figured the chance of that TV show getting made are still slim, sadly. And yes, Jared was spoiled and a little bit thoughtless, but I'm glad you thought he didn't stray too far into obnoxious. It's also good to hear his backstory worked for you, because I didn't wat it to be too intrusive. Danneel--yes, she was definitely making sure Jared was ready to commit. Such a good cousin! ;p Thanks for commenting!