Action! (KrisYeol Fic) 5/5 (Final!)

[lizziepro]

Title: Action!
Pairing: KrisYeol
Genre: College!au, romance, drama, comedy 
Rating: PG-13 (swearing)
Summary:Wu Fan has dreams of being the next Lars Von Trier, while Chanyeol just wants to make people happy. This partner film  project is obviously going to be a disaster, right?...

a/n: lol so wu fan angst was intense, and honestly he'd been too

Comments

[shayepuree]

YES FINALLY
Bahhh, so glad you finally got around to finishing this~ Can't believe you managed to, considering how busy you've been. TEACH ME HOW TO TIME MANAGEMENT. ㅠㅠ

"......................Be over in 20. Then you have a half hour to talk to me, but that's it. I'll send him out to go buy milk. It'll take him that long to pick between pink cap and blue cap."
BAEKHYUN IS PERFECT AND THIS IS SO TRUE xD
This whole bit is so Baekhyun, honestly. (Bacon bit. Bwahahaha.) It's the perfect balance of caring but also bitchy, which is super real, considering the fact that Kris made his bestie so upset, but he also wants to help them make up. ...I don't think that was a sentence, but you get what I mean. You do really good characterization and I love it.

[If people just focused on his exterior, no one could look inside and possibly hurt him.
He didn't want to be hurt, not like his mom was hurt. That was the last thing he wanted.
So, instead he fought, and kept fighting.
He needed to stop.]
I can't decide how to indicate parts I'm quoting so I'm gonna try brackets? I dunno. But anyway, this part. Right in the heart.

I see you, working Louis Garrel into this. You obviously need to make me watch his movies, 'cause I don't know this one, but the moment fits really well.
I love it when people write stuff they really know about and incorporate real things, bahhh. It just makes the story that much truer.

[There is no spontaneity in any of this violence. It is planned, strategized to the most minute detail, so as to prove a prowess and lack of vulnerability.]
Perfect.

[Of course, to most others watching the movie, it'd just seem like some hippie bullshit...]
I LIKE HOW THIS IS WHAT YOU FOLLOW IT UP WITH xD Legit laughter, because this is real.

Ugh, I love Baekhyun so much. ㅠㅠ
That's right, baby. You protect your friend.
Yessss, yes to this whole thing. Baekhyun would totally take charge of the situation like this and put Kris in his place. Angry Baekhyun is scarier than angry Kris, in my opinion.

["That Happy Virus? Obviously you were the fucking cure for the virus because now it's gone."]
Ooh, ouch. This is perfect.

YES. GO, BAEKHYUN. SPELL IT ALL OUT FOR HIM BECAUSE KRIS IS REAL DUMB.
Dropping knowledge like bombs~ That's my boy.

["EW~ You can be an animal on your own time at your apartment, but not in mine. Here, take this kleenex." Baekhyun said, grabbing a kleenex from the counter behind him and passing it to Wu Fan, judging him the entire time.]
BAEKHYUN IS SO GREAT
UGH
HOW DO YOU WRITE HIM SO PERFECTLY??

Kris is sort of a coward, but it's very real and I love him for it. xD

BAEKYEOL IS SO DEVIOUS OH MY GOSH
In cahoots the entire time. These kids. I really can't. Poor Kris has no idea.
Serves him right, though. xD

["Alright, kids! Let's get going! A lot to see today, a lot for us to enjoy, who wants to go first?" Professor Jung said, as he practically skipped into the room with his messenger bag and sunglasses.]
SOBS BECAUSE YONGHWA

[Then suddenly, Chanyeol's face appeared from the bottom of the screen, right into the shot, smiling like a fiend.]
No...Lizzie, he didn't. Nonononono...it's too cute...it's too perfect...
/tearing up already ㅠㅠ

[For Pinky, this is my attempt to fix everything I fucked up. I hope you find happiness in this movie, just as I've found my happiness in you. I'm sorry. Love Dragon.]
THE CUTEEEEEEEEALHGPWOEURISDGHIERWU
Now THAT is how you confess.

[A soft kiss graced the top of his ponytail styled hair.]
YES.

["I'm saying you better just kiss me before I change my mind, you dumb animal-"]
DOUBLE YES BECAUSE CHANYEOL IS PERFECT OH MY GOSH xD

LIZZIEEEEEEE COME HERE AND LET ME LOVE YOU
THIS FIC
THIS WHOLE ENTIRE FIC AND MY FEELS
I DON'T EVEN FREAKING SHIP THIS BUT UGH MY HEART...MAYBE I SORT OF DO NOW
Yeah. Really, really love this. It's so good. The emotions are super real, the conflict is intense, and the resolution is cute and a little awkward and then freaking adorable. Forever in awe of your dialogue and banter, because it's perfect.

NOT EVEN SORRY FOR WRITING YOU A NOVEL AS A COMMENT BECAUSE THIS FIC DESERVES IT AND I WILL UNDOUBTEDLY DISCUSS IT WITH YOU EVEN MORE WHEN I SEE YOU TOMORROW BECAUSE OVERWHELMING FEELS

[lizziepro]

BAHAHAHA XD WOMAN. YOU AND YOUR NOVEL.
I LOVE IT. ^.^
I tried to do your Bacon bun the best I could, and obviously it went well because you wrote all this~ XD

YES.
WE WILL WATCH LOUIS GARREL THINGS.
I'LL START YOU OFF WITH THE ONES WITHOUT FULL FRONTAL NUDITY. THEN THOSE WILL BE WATCHED.
it's like as he gets older, there's less nudity. lulz. but yeah. we will watch them~~ ^.^

and of course baekyeol is devious. have you ever fucking seen them!?
oh right, you live with them.....
^^;;;

I JUST WANTED CHANYEOL TO BE A REALLY GOOD CHARACTER, AND DUIZHANG, AND I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THEM.
yes.
let's have chats in asia class today~ ^^ 000000000000000000000000000