writing meme!
And from my Star Wars WIP:
Luke wants to complain because none of this makes sense, but he knows he's only a student, so he'll give it a try. Behind the fogged plastic of the mask he closes his eyes to add another layer of darkness, one that feels natural, and then he is startled to feel a hand around his. But it's not a threat and feels like a loved one lost or long-forgotten. The next three shots come nowhere near him, as he anticipates where each one will be and moves like water to meet them.
"Did you see that?" He pulls off the helmet and lets the hair tumble down. He's sure someone was there, but that doesn't mean she was visible to everyone here, or even anyone at all, necessarily.
The lesson we can take from this is that I write very long sentences ;)
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Luke wants to complain because none of this makes sense, but he knows he's only a student, so he'll give it a try. Behind the fogged plastic of the mask he closes his eyes to add another layer of darkness, one that feels natural, and then he is startled to feel a hand around his. But it's not a threat and feels like a loved one lost or long-forgotten. The next three shots come nowhere near him, as he anticipates where each one will be and moves like water to meet them.
"Did you see that?" He pulls off the helmet and lets the hair tumble down. He's sure someone was there, but that doesn't mean she was visible to everyone here, or even anyone at all, necessarily.
The lesson we can take from this is that I write very long sentences ;)
tag yourself if you want to play along!
This was originally posted at https://ernest.dreamwidth.org/6554.html. There are
comments there.