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Oct 27, 2005 20:13

0.o i got a little over excited in my poetry class yesterday ( Read more... )

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kylokay October 28 2005, 04:59:27 UTC
I miss creative writing class.

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emixcore October 28 2005, 06:25:29 UTC
<3 it's a good poem. I like. Here's one to you from me (for no particular reason):

Spin me up into these lies
Tell me that it's all okay
In the end we're both aware
How it'll end up anyway

I always tried to believe it
But the strings are just so tangled
That I'm falling
And these wings won't last forever

Watch me contort into these dreams
As I resort to sew the seams
To patch this rag doll heart
That you so honestly unwound

Marionette with broken wings
Music box broken to shards
Paint my eyes with elusive regrets
On decks of playing cards

The rhyme scheme doesn't match, I know. It was a song I made up on my way home through the baseball field at the cheese park.
I guess you had to be there to understand why the rhyme scheme works.

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