Week Nine. Comment
I'm very late coming with these entries, my internet has been down for last couple of weeks.
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Seb this is amazing, I really love this poem! It is very emotive, with your short sentences and use of punctuation separating each word. It really left me wanting more but certainly gave a feeling of elation towards the end.
Very well done!
Liz
Comment on: http://littlenedved.livejournal.com/7142.html
Seb this is amazing, I really love this poem! It is very emotive, with your short sentences and use of punctuation separating each word. It really left me wanting more but certainly gave a feeling of elation towards the end.
Very well done!
Liz