We'll Reinvent Love [1/10]

Dec 09, 2008 16:58

Title: We’ll Reinvent Love
Rating: hard R
Pairing: Ryden
Summary: He remembers back when he was younger, and he would scrape his elbow and, because he hadn’t yet started these daily screaming matches with his mom, she would place a band-aid over it, ever so gently, and then an even gentler kiss on top of that. And because Ryan looks like his world ( Read more... )

reinvent love, ryden, fic

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wilted_petals18 December 9 2008, 22:34:39 UTC
wow, i realllllllly like it. you describe things very well, haha.
=D

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livinglifeloud December 9 2008, 22:40:01 UTC
thank you so much :]

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courtneyxrofl December 9 2008, 22:44:12 UTC
that was just...wow. the wording, the everything was so beautiful.
-memories-
<3

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livinglifeloud December 10 2008, 17:30:45 UTC
aww thank you!
i only yesterday figured out how to add to memories :P i'm a lj idiot haha.

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rock_my_town December 9 2008, 22:44:20 UTC
his lips pillowing between Brendon’s in a way that makes him understand why they invented kissing in the first place

I love that line. Can't wait to see where this goes :)

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livinglifeloud December 10 2008, 17:28:18 UTC
thank you :)

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lyrblack December 9 2008, 22:58:48 UTC
You have to be lying to say this is your first slash/sex scene. I've read "seasoned" writers who aren't nearly this eloquent.

Beautifully done, I can't wait to see what happens!!

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livinglifeloud December 9 2008, 23:01:46 UTC
haha. yep, my very first, although i've probably read more than my fair share. but thank you! :]

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sweetrevenge418 December 9 2008, 23:01:20 UTC
OM NOM NOM.
: D

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livinglifeloud December 10 2008, 17:06:20 UTC
I CAN HAZ RYDEN?
haha.

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