Offered: Fanfic Critique Offered:Teen Novel Critique
Offer #1 - I will critique a fanfic of no more than 50,000 words and no less than 20,000 words in any of the following fandoms: Twilight, Harry Potter, any Sarah Dessen, Meg Cabot, or Tamora Pierce worlds, One Tree Hill, or any other book I may have read. (Please ask. I'm a teen book reviewer so if it's a popular teen book/series, I've probably read it.) I will work with any characters but I'm best at: Twilight: Bella/Edward or Bella/Jacob. In Harry Potter: Harry/Hermione, Hermione/Ginny, Remus/Tonks, Remus/Sirius, and Harry/Ginny. In Tamora Pierce: Daine/Numair, Alanna/Jon. In One Tree Hill: Lucas/Peyton, Haley/Nathan, and Brooke/Lucas. I will do all other pairings in those fandoms though. However, the rating can NOT be higher than PG-13!
I will make notes on characterization, the plot, setting, etc. as well as the writing. I've been a fanfic writer for many years and I've critiqued a few fanfics.
Delivery: Add one month for every 10,000 words. It'll probably be done before that but I'd like to give myself some time.
Min. Bid: $5
Offer #2 - I will critique a novel written for teens of no more than 75,000 words and no less than 30,000 words. I will comment on every aspect of the novel, including characterization, unrealistic scenes, the plot and setting, and the writing. I will accept every genre except for strict SF and horror, though I prefer drama or romance.
Qualifications: I am a teen myself, as well as a teen book reviewer, writer, and avid reader. I read about 7 books a week so I can point out exactly what makes a good story and what doesn't. I know what is cliched and I can give suggestions to make it better. Since I write myself, I understand what it's like to write a book and I can give suggestions on that. Also, since I'm a teen myself, I can tell whether or not it's going to be real to teens.
Delivery: Please add one month for every 10,000 words. It will most likely be done before that but I want to give myself time, as I will have other novels to critique.
Min. Bid - $10