Cheese's last job before hooking up with the party

[skurfiska]

Just another stick up…

A beat up red euro car slowly pulled into the garage, after and hour of watching a nervous ork that must be D-loc’s muscle sitting on the stoop. He ducked inside as the door slid down with one last glace at the scene. “You think he saw us yo ?” “Naw man, calm down. He ain‘t seen shit.” Mo has always got doubts

Comments

[mysticdragons00]

Alright, now your making me look bad :-p I'm the only one who hasn't written a story so far.

Thanks for the insight into Cheese sounds like he and Shaun will get along nicely.

[skurfiska]

I should have proof read this before posting it, oh well

[ray20886]

I’m glad that other people are writing stories. I enjoy reading what other charter of our game might be thinking or how they say the mission go down. But I did get a little lost in the story.

So after the run, your 2 buddies turned on you. Then you wanted revenge. Ok I’m following the story so far. What I have a hard time believing is that you set off a grenade off at the table you and Rocky was sitting at. And then you were able to walk away with any additional injuries.

[mysticdragons00]

Obviously he was ducked behind the other table :-p

Shhh...don't think too hard about it...

[skurfiska]

yeah I dove on to another table and Rocky dove on to of the one with the grenade under it, and the fact that the van crashed after I was thrown out and Mo was driveing was supposed to insinuate the rocky killed Mo. I will be more decriptive in my other storys I just wrote that one up in a few minutes hence all the typos.

[lordscatch]

Three Points, great job.