- Chapter One - The Denial Twist (Part Four)

[tigermaus]

Comments

[watcher_junior]

Oh. My. God.

I so didn't see that coming! When I remembered the whole car crashing through the diner thing and realized that was what was happening, I thought that, since Jess was there, you might just have him and Rory wave to each other through the hole in the diner instead of Luke and Rory and it'd be kinda cute and everything...

And then you go and squash him with a car! Not so cute but definitely a twist. Not a little twist, but a twist all the same.

I'm only not totally freaking out because I know you wouldn't kill him. lol

As always, brilliant storytelling and wonderful manips!

[tigermaus]

*gg*

I love you!

To be honest this "twist" was the basic idea for this fic ;)
*gg* - cute, huh?
You should know us better *gg*

Your trust in us is strong it seems ...

Thanks a lot - we hope we can keep it up in chapter 2.

*hug*

[uptheapples]

YOU GUYS HURT JESS! YOU HURT JESS!

Who are you, Leigh?! :)

No, but I love this. And it's so much better than what really went down.

I'm just gonna pretend this is real, m'kay?

[tigermaus]

We did not ... Kirk did ;)

*lol*

No one is like the Leigh - I will adore her forever and ever for that ff :)

Thanks so much! This means a lot from you :D

As you wish ;)
*hugs*

[horselovergurl]

noooooooooooo!!!!!!

Ok, I kinda saw Jess getting hurt, but STILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I want chapter two NOW!

...

please? *puppy eyes*

It was good. I like it. The Luke/Jess interactions are awesome. so, please update soooooonnnnnnnnnn.

*fangirlyness*

[hallon02]

Aww, sorry. :p

You saw our big twist coming? *pouts* lol. :D

We're working on it. Just gotta get some kinks out of the story and such. ;) I promise we'll get it up as soon as possible. :)

Thank you. I love Jess and Luke together. Glad you like it too. :)

*huggles*

[horselovergurl]

i only saw the twist coming right before, when luke and jess were talking about the 'red light ceremony'. i only wish this had really happened! (not jess getting hurt, but coming back)

can't wait for more!

[2cutelena]

What.the.heck. Nooooo

I have not seen a lick of GG this season so I had no idea a car was coming through the diner, one the less that it was gonna hit Jess. I was freaking out till I read Ali's review *hugs her*

You two big meanies:p Cars are not allowed to hit Jess. They can go by or around him and leave their drivers starring in awe of his sexy being; but never ever ever are they allowed to hit him.

Your both brilliant and I loved it, but you cannot leave me with that! More soon pleaseeeee :oD

[tigermaus]

*lol*
Awww sweety, I am sorry we scared you :P

Be patient, maybe something good will come out of the misbehaving car ;)

I am pretty sure there will be more, we just have to put all the pieces together :)

*hugs*

[lucia_la]

Nope i don't hate you guys, Kirk a little, Taylor too and Rory also(but that's not news ;) )

It's was great all of it every part, and is it weird that when I read about Jess being hit, i kinda picture that part of "Wizard of OZ" with the wicked witch and the house falling, and the toes curling.

I owed you a review so this is the best i could come up with.

And now i'm gonna sit here patiently waiting for the chapter to come. *swing legs, plays with fingers*

*hugs*

[hallon02]

:) lol, poor Kirk. ;) Glad you don't hate us anyway. :p

Thank you. :) lol, that's a funny comparison. The wonders of the mind, huh?

Aww, nothing owed. Though reviews are nice. :p

Haha, perfect picture of patience there. ;)

*huggles*