How's My Driving? [concrit post]

[littlestlang]

Cassie is one of my newer characters, and I welcome any help in fine-tuning her! Even if it's something like 'an American teenager wouldn't say that'. Any and all constructive criticism is welcome; by extension, if you want to tell me what I'm doing right, that is also entirely allowed. ♥

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