Comments | littlesammy: "Travel Diary" - Tony, Ziva, and some very grown-up fun

littlesammy

"Travel Diary" - Tony, Ziva, and some very grown-up fun

Jan 27, 2013 21:20

disclaimer: So not mine. Just borrowed them for play. Put them back unharmed, but relaxed.

notes & warnings: Sex. Like, lots of it. There is somewhat of a plot (and a good deal of pretty adult romance) that snuck in while I wasn't looking (sorry about that) but please fill in all required details of the actual case file on your own. It's... sort ( Read more... )

fiction: ncis, smut

Comments 26

magicalzayz January 27 2013, 21:14:41 UTC

So I read and heeded the warning, because I get like a five-year-old when smut is explicit. That means I have little usefulness to contribute here. But I did read some of the beginning, and some of the last scene as I was scrolling down, and as usual, you break my heart into thousands of tiny little pieces and it is the most exquisite pain I know.

Maybe when I feel brave enough to venture into smut-land, I'll try this again properly - but for now, the parts I did read were beautiful, and I'm sorry I'm so squeamish.

ext_1171099 January 27 2013, 21:23:44 UTC

Oh, what a lovely surprised for a Sunday afternoon.

LOVELY
HOT
and in the end
SWEET

OH YES
I like it.
A lot.

And I will read it again and again too.

All I can say is thank you.

agentscully514 January 28 2013, 02:02:40 UTC

Sammy can mix sexy and emotional like no one else.

ext_1171099 January 28 2013, 12:14:08 UTC

Totally agreed agentscully54

agentscully514 January 27 2013, 21:29:59 UTC

fantastically sexy. thank you. :)

trueromantic_1 January 27 2013, 21:35:38 UTC

AMAZING!!! I absolutely loved this fic!! This might actually be one of my favorites that you wrote. The emotions, and the internal struggles you showed them having, it all just worked so perfectly. It was all so very them, and I could see this exactly being something that would happen on screen, perhaps even post "Shabbat Shalom." I just...Ugh! I don't even have words to fully express how much I loved this and how well it worked for me in the context of the characters, their personalities, and their relationship.

We really need to get you hired on as a writer for the show lol!!

agentscully514 January 28 2013, 01:51:34 UTC

if they ever do a porn episode ... I want Sammy to write it. :)

bugaboobrittz January 27 2013, 21:39:09 UTC

Thank you for the best birthday present ever. I have many delicious feels right now. :D