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littlesammy

"And So It Goes" - Tony/Ziva

Jul 14, 2012 02:52

disclaimer: So not mine. Just borrowed them for play. Put them back unharmed.

notes & warnings: About a month ago, my dearest sleifa suddenly hit me with a story prompt out of the blue. It's most certainly not a topic I'd usually go for, because it's (usually) not the kind of story I like, so at first I looked at it and said, "Yeah, right". But then ( Read more... )

fiction: ncis

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So, so good! mrs_dinozzo33 July 14 2012, 01:17:57 UTC

That was (I think) exactly what it would have been like if they were in that situation. I cried while reading that just remembering Kill Ari and reading Tony's thoughts. You made my day! Brava! :)

Re: So, so good! littlesammy July 15 2012, 21:23:31 UTC

Thank you. ♥ I had many feels while writing this. Glad some of them transfered. :)

alterangirl July 14 2012, 02:02:34 UTC

Just--oh god. Beautiful. That's all I can really say.

littlesammy July 15 2012, 21:23:55 UTC

*hugs* Thank you. :)

megamom2 July 14 2012, 02:18:24 UTC

littlesammy July 15 2012, 21:25:17 UTC

My mind just started wandering after reading that prompt, and somehow, this felt like a natural progression.

Thank you ext_417480 July 14 2012, 02:53:09 UTC

Even though it's AU it feels like it could have gone that way. Really enjoyed reading it.

Re: Thank you littlesammy July 15 2012, 21:25:54 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it worked out. ♥

kytivafan July 14 2012, 03:14:02 UTC

You know I think this is absolutely perfect for your 100th T/Z story.

I actually had a small lump in my throat reading this because the whole time I was thinking "they really are soul mates, and fated to be together...even if it took 30 years".

Bravo!

littlesammy July 15 2012, 21:32:08 UTC

*nods* For a while I was tempted to do other things before this one, but I always kept coming back because it felt like just the right kind of story for the 100th. And I find myself coming back to this universe in my head, for some reason, because I like the way they are with each other in this - weirdly relaxed, because this time they really had to figure out on their own what they want out of life and what they don't. And what they had was okay, but still not quite the right thing, and now the other comes along... and it feels a bit like a reward after all these years. Like they can really "cherish each other", without doubts, without second thoughts... without anything to really keep them apart.

Man, I'm having a lot of feels these days... =_=