"Director's Cut" - NCIS, Tony/Ziva and Somalia

Aug 30, 2010 00:01

disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowed them for play. Put them back unharmed, but relaxed.

setting: Shortly before "Patriot Down", for the chemistry of it. Also, in this universe the OOC atrocity that was "Obsession" never happened.

warnings & rating: The shippy part of this is drunken, very adult almost-sweetness - well, as sweet as two emotionally ( Read more... )

fiction: ncis

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sleifa August 29 2010, 22:15:39 UTC
FIRST!! (shhhht, don't tell anyone I'm cheating, brb reading now :D)

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hadley63 August 29 2010, 23:00:53 UTC
BEAUTIFUL.
I loved every single part.
Great idea and i would not be suprise if it was actually true ...

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littlesammy August 30 2010, 22:11:37 UTC
I would SO do the happy dance if that would turn out to be true. XD It just makes so much sense and explains a whole bunch of small inconsistencies in one fell swoop...

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sleifa August 29 2010, 23:20:59 UTC
SINCE WE GET ALONG (LOVE EACH OTHER SOUNDS WEIRD!?) SO WELL AND KNOW WHAT WE WANT TO SAY I THINK I JUST TAKE SENTENCES AND PUT SOME WORDS TO THEM KAY? (ignore the capslock)

It's a bit like Somalia all over again, just that she can reach out this time and touch him.
I wanted them to touch each other so badly back then and it's like GÄNSEHAUT!

he holds her tight, not caring that she isn't exactly smelling like roses
WIN. You know why.

"Okay," he says after a while, wiping his hands on a kitchen towel. "But you're not driving."
simple line, big meaning. She lets him watch her back and this is just heartwarming.

"It was my decision to hand the location of Saleem's cell to your father,"
I didn't thought I would comment on the 'back story' cos you know I think it's so... TRUE but I didn't get this thing. I feel stupid.

She never turns her head to look at him. He never stops the calming motion of his hands, guiding hers.OMG I CAN'T EVEN ( ... )

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littlesammy August 29 2010, 23:42:07 UTC
but I didn't get this thing. I feel stupid.

Don't. I had to watch the whole Aliyah arc so often that it's not funny anymore to actually form this theory. What is meant here is that at the end of Aliyah, Vance gives Eli an USB stick that has the location of Saleem's camp on it, and that info was pulled from Rivkin's laptop by Abby. And in response to that, Eli sends Ziva and her team to clear out the camp.

COS THIS IS THE FIRST TIME EVER EVER EVER I THINK YOU WROTE ZIVA OOC

*scratches head* I don't think so. I think she mostly expected something Tony usually purchases, and for some reason my brain insists that he often rambles about "low-fat" when listing his coffee orders. I might be wrong there, though. ;)

Your storys make me want to be in love, make me want to be loved

*sighs* I know that will sound strange, but - me, too... :(

I'm glad it worked for you, sweetie. Thank you. :)

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patry_trusky August 29 2010, 23:35:44 UTC
I loved it Sammy! You never cease to amaze me. Well done.

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littlesammy August 30 2010, 22:10:02 UTC
Thank you. :) To be honest, I have no idea at all where all these ideas keep coming from...

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patry_trusky August 30 2010, 22:29:19 UTC
:P Well, as long as they keep coming... :)

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angvau57 August 29 2010, 23:53:28 UTC
THIS is all kinds of amazing!!

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littlesammy August 30 2010, 22:08:14 UTC
Thank you. :)

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