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The Mighty Boosh Christmas Special of Glitter - Chapter 5

Feb 03, 2016 10:43

“I... was not expecting that,” Naboo said in a low, confused voice, holding the hoover gingerly.

Howard, wobbling in his ridiculous heels, edged closer to Naboo and the comforting bulk of Bollo as they watched, in horrified fascination, as the Spirit of Jazz stretched his new limbs and settled in to the skin that had once been Howard’s and had more ( Read more... )

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ideserveyou February 3 2016, 22:42:45 UTC

Genius! No, I couldn't wait until bedtime, I had to come straight here and read it. LOVE Bollo's lines, your Spirit of Jazz voice is spot-on, the peril continues, and I have no idea what is going to happen next... Absolutely ticks all the boxes for me!

littleredchucks February 4 2016, 00:07:05 UTC

Thank you so much, you're so kind. I'm glad it was ok. Thank you.

concupiscence66 February 4 2016, 01:48:48 UTC

My head is spinning, but I like this twist! Howard and Vince all snug in one body...

littleredchucks February 4 2016, 04:22:03 UTC

Thank you! Glad it worked ok. xx

bluestocking79 February 4 2016, 07:03:10 UTC

Chucks, I know I say it often, but: you ARE a monkey genius! This is a terrific installment; I love it. It's deeply in character, and SO funny. So many great, sharp lines, and all of the character voices are just spot on. I could hear the lines being said. I can't decide which is my favorite bit: Howard's bout of insecurity and irritation at the thought that people are stampeding away just to avoid seeing his body in a thong, Bollo being totally unimpressed by the Spirit of Jazz's plans to corrupt a Shoreditch that's... already totally corrupted, or this line: "I don’t know who was in here first but they was easy to force out, ‘specially with your little magic man sucking away like a rent boy getting paid double time"

I love the way you've dealt with some of the elements that have been introduced, and the idea of Howard and Vince having to share ownership and be side-by-side in Vince's body is a stroke of genius! Plus, it's a really convenient format for them to deal with some of their emotional/relationship issues, perhaps. All ( ... )

littleredchucks February 5 2016, 05:13:40 UTC

Thank you so much, you're so very kind and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Phew, it's a relief to know it didn't suck or ruin the whole story. xx