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Jul 14, 2008 19:12

While I strolled, I took a stop
For on that street, a barber shop
And in that first chair I did plop
It made me feel so...naughty.

It feels wonderful to be somewhere familiar.  I've found a very small barber shop to call home, it sits on the corner of 5th avenue and 12th street.  If anyone is feeling particularly lonely, I could always use some company ( Read more... )

rhyming to myself again

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[voice of a 5 year old, hiii] tettsui July 15 2008, 06:23:49 UTC
That's an interestin' poem.

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Re: [voice of a 5 year old, hiii] littleoffthetop July 15 2008, 06:37:47 UTC
Why thank you. Though I wish I could have thought of another word besides plop, I can't say I like it.

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[voice of a 5 year old, hiii] tettsui July 15 2008, 06:51:57 UTC
What about 'I sat atop'?

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Re: [voice of a 5 year old, hiii] littleoffthetop July 15 2008, 17:13:02 UTC
Why yes, that's a lovely one! May I ask the name of the poet I'm speaking to?

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[voice of a 5 year old, hiii] tettsui July 15 2008, 17:13:57 UTC
Name's Lavi~! At your service, yeah~

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Re: [voice of a 5 year old, hiii] littleoffthetop July 15 2008, 22:50:45 UTC
At my service? My dear, you sound as if you're my slave.

In any case, my name is Fred. It's very nice to meet you, Lavi.

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[voice of a 5 year old, hiii] tettsui July 15 2008, 23:07:48 UTC
Nah, I'm just bein' friendly.

Nice to meet you too, Fred. So, are you a barber?

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Re: [voice of a 5 year old, hiii] littleoffthetop July 16 2008, 00:09:00 UTC
Why yes, I am.
Well, that's not entirely true. I'm afraid I'm nothing without my trimmer. I suppose you could say I'm a barber at heart.

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[voice of a 5 year old, hiii] tettsui July 16 2008, 00:47:34 UTC
Do ya do poetry on the side?

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Re: [voice of a 5 year old, hiii] littleoffthetop July 16 2008, 01:03:39 UTC
Well I don't write them down or anything, I simply enjoy rhyming to myself. It's quite amusing.

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