I think I might’ve inhaled you

[littlenotebook]

Title: I think I might’ve inhaled you
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: I do not own Sherlock, that is the property of the BBC and Steven Moffat. I am simply taking them out to play.
Pairing/Characters: Sherlock/John
Word Count: 5,176
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As John sinks toward the bottom of the pool, Sherlock tight against his chest, he thinks that

Comments

[pippinsalanna]

Lovely! Simply lovely! I love how it's their life post-Moriarty, but we get the snapshots of the pool interspersed. And how you rotate through the many madnesses of Sherlock until that and John's frustration leads up to that last (so touching) scene. And I really like your title because by the end, it seems to represent inhaling cigarette smoke or inhaling chlorine water at the bottom of a pool. Very well-written and poignant.

[littlenotebook]

Thanks so much! *blush* I hoped the title would work just like that. You are the perfect reader!

[jazzonia]

This is absolutely gorgeous. I love the construction, the pacing, the characterizations... really everything. Stylistic without being distracting, and the tone was just aching. Thank you ♥

[xjill]

Beautiful.

[frames_in_aria]

asdfghjk

Your writing is beautiful and gorgeous. I have no other words, it's just simply, beautiful ♥

[shortcrust]

Oh my gosh, this is absolutely lovely.