(Harry Potter, Remus/Luna) A Different View

Jan 15, 2006 22:19

Originally written for rillathegrape for the smutty_claus Exchange 2005. As the name of the community implies, this piece of fanfiction is NOT for those under eighteen. Heed the warning, plz.

Title: A Different View
Author: crazylittleme @ vnilla
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Remus/Luna
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: J.K. Rowling and assorted others own everything. Not mine!
Author's Notes: Had ( Read more... )

fic: harry potter

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Comments 21

tragiccomedy January 16 2006, 03:53:32 UTC
...hot. very hot.

i liked it...never put those two together, but you did. and did it SO WELL. mrrrrow.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:01:39 UTC
You've got to love those random and unexpectedly HOT pairings. *G*

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tragiccomedy January 16 2006, 04:03:39 UTC
oh yes. *dunks head in vat of cold water*

p.s. i loooved the chocolate reference. very subtle, but very very moony.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:44:52 UTC
Remus = delicious like chocolate? I think YES. XD

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inathunderstorm January 16 2006, 04:09:53 UTC
Wow, you are just a *gorgeous* writer, and I really really like this fic! I love your prose--it's really poetic and lyrical. I love the dreamy quality of this--the way you use language, the whimsy in this fic, it's so very Luna, and the Moon...gosh, this is just great!

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:30:59 UTC
Oh my goodness, thank you for the wonderful review! I'm rather in love with language, in case you hadn't noticed. :D

(By the by, I love your fanfiction. I went "Squee!" when I saw who the review was from.)

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inathunderstorm January 16 2006, 04:36:54 UTC
Oh, thanks. *blushes*

Seriously, you're really talented. I'm going to have to read more of your stuff!!

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:42:05 UTC
Haha, you're not the only one blushing. *G* Er, happy reading!

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kethlenda January 16 2006, 04:21:43 UTC
Here via sionnain's rec. I absolutely adore this story! Favorite line:

Luna's eyes are open now, and bright, and Remus is drawn into them not like a flower to the sun but like the tides to the moon, the moon, always the moon.

Gorgeous, and lovely job of weaving in all the moon references, and perfect last sentence.

Inviting you to join hp_spotlighting. You'll want to check your invites page. We'd love to have you on board, and it's a great chance to have your fic widely read! :)

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:31:42 UTC
Boy, is my face red. Thank you SO MUCH for the review and the invite! Of course I'll be joining. :)

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kethlenda January 16 2006, 04:34:37 UTC
Oops, I didn't realize you had two LJs, would you prefer I invite the crazylittleme one?

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:39:49 UTC
*sheepish grin* Actually, that would be a bit easier, as I'm usually logged in under this name. Should have mentioned that. But thank you!

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stephanometra January 16 2006, 04:33:17 UTC
This is fantastic.

Totally and completely fantastic.

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littledust January 16 2006, 04:40:27 UTC
Thank you so much for the review! Glad you liked. ♥

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Nicely done! jazzypom January 16 2006, 10:36:20 UTC
From the ties of 'Loony'/'Moony' to the notion of her 'shaping his happiness'. It's the language that kills me, I think and the fact that you made Luna so IC (not many people can do that convinciingly). It's well done.

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Re: Nicely done! littledust January 16 2006, 22:20:48 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Glad to have kept Luna IC; it is a difficult thing to accomplish. :D

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