(Harry Potter, Trio) Once Upon A

[littledust_fic]

Hooray for completing my triofqf fic! Have to say it was a lovely challenge. And thanks to tammaiya for last-minute beta.

Title: Once Upon A
Author: crazylittleme @ vnilla
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: J.K. Rowling and assorted others own everything. Not mine!
Author's Notes: I experimented a good deal with style in this fic; I became

Comments

[vexia]

Um, I have no words except that this is certainly going on my rec list.

(I did like the way you didn't finish the introductory titles, like they were incomplete. I get a sense of that throughout the story, things purposely or accidentally unfinished. There's the motif of leaving things alone, not doing anything about it -- very clever, in my opinion.)

[littledust]

Thanks for reviewing! I'm fond of the incomplete titles as well. :D

[mjai]

I've been staring at this on my flist, the whole evening, scared to read it because omg Angst.

But.

I'm glad I finally sucked it up :3

[littledust]

I'm glad you did as well. Thanks for reviewing! ♥

[bebe_jinx]

This was simply wonderful. I did love how it was snippets instead of whole scenes and the subtle way you described there undoing. your writing was so good i would pick a line that I loved but well.... it's basically each one. This is going in my memories and, if you haven't already, think about posting it in the Table for Three archive.

[littledust]

I wasn't aware of the Table for Three archive, thanks for pointing it out to me. :)

Glad you enjoyed! ♥

[aome]

What a wonderful use of the unfinished phrases. You could really feel how their lives were held in equal suspension, unable to click the pieces together until the end. I don't always go for 'arty' but this was really well done!

[littledust]

Thanks for reviewing and enjoying! :D

[tunxeh]

I'm not usually a fan of triofic, but I might be if there were more like this one. Very real.

[littledust]

Glad you liked this Triofic. Thanks for reviewing. :)