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Torchwood drabble: To Know You

Mar 29, 2009 21:35

Title: To Know You
Author: rustydog
Characters: Jack, Ianto
Rating: G
Notes: Written for tw100's challenge #113 - Alternate Endings. Assumes an alternate ending for 1x07 "Greeks Bearing Gifts" and concerns 1x08 "They Keep Killing..."

( When Tosh didn't destroy the pendant, the temptation was too great. )

ianto jones, torchwood, drabble, captain jack

Comments 16

donutsweeper March 30 2009, 03:12:59 UTC

Oooooh, the temptation to read Jack's mind. I can see that!!!!

rustydog March 30 2009, 04:42:21 UTC

Assuming Tosh never let on that Jack's impervious to the pendant hoodoo. I might want to read Jack's mind, too. He's really not an open book!

I just realized it might not be very clear that Ianto is fired. How did that read?

donutsweeper March 30 2009, 04:43:14 UTC

I read it as either fired or about to be (or assumed he would be).

rustydog March 30 2009, 04:46:58 UTC

Okay, thanks. Sometimes a word or two can make a big difference, and I wasn't sure.

topgeargirl2 March 30 2009, 03:53:23 UTC

very good

rustydog March 30 2009, 04:42:47 UTC

Thank you.

phoenix64 March 30 2009, 04:05:39 UTC

Poor Ianto, I can understand why he'd try something like that.

rustydog March 30 2009, 04:43:52 UTC

Yeah, Jack hasn't been exactly forthcoming or consistent, especially up to that point. I think I'd want to figure him out, too.

aeron_lanart March 30 2009, 09:38:24 UTC

Poor Ianto; penalised for being only human.

This is ruthless!Jack to a T, well done.

rustydog March 30 2009, 18:19:47 UTC

Thank you! I got whiplash in Season 1 between forgiving!Jack and ruthless!Jack, so no wonder Ianto was curious, poor fellow.

scottishwillow March 30 2009, 15:03:47 UTC

Very well done. Once again Ianto does all the wrong things for all the right reasons.

rustydog March 30 2009, 18:20:07 UTC

Ah yes, great summary. Thank you!