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littledelusion July 11 2011, 02:56:45 UTC
Ohh, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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angelprojekt July 11 2011, 15:57:10 UTC
I can actually hear Death's voice the way you've written her. Very nice.

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littledelusion July 11 2011, 16:38:56 UTC
Thank you!
I actually just finished a companion fic starring her as she reaps victims of the Hunger Games. She kind of scares me. X)

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insomniaticrose July 11 2011, 17:11:40 UTC
This is beautifully written:) So tragic but compelling <3

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littledelusion July 11 2011, 17:21:47 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

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chewychicle July 11 2011, 19:57:58 UTC
This was just wonderful - I love how you described Death, especially her changing forms. I also loved how the beginning and the ending paralleled each other. So sweet, and so sad.

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littledelusion July 11 2011, 20:44:18 UTC
Thank you very much! :D

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century_fox March 11 2012, 20:43:01 UTC
Holy fucking shit, I am actually on the verge of tears right now. This fic is so beautiful (but so incredibly sad- my heart hurts so much for Finnick). I love that you chose to write him looking back at everyone he loves after his death- it makes so much sense that he would want to hold on to them for as long as he can and not be ready to leave.

“The broken man will simply fade, dreaming of his loved ones while he sleeps.” Haymitch. That line especially killed me, because Haymitch is my absolute favorite character in this series. That entire section of how each one of them was going to die was so painful for me but each scenario was so fitting for each of their characters.

The ending was fabulous as well- I love the fact that you circled back to the "you humans and your sentiments" line.

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littledelusion March 11 2012, 23:17:28 UTC
What a lovely comment! Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And please don't cry :< *hands over tissues*

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