FF: In This World (Part 1)

[little_zigzags]

Title: In This World (pt 1

Comments

[lilachigh]

Oh I'm loving this! Just trying to write my very first JD fic and now think I should give up!

[little_zigzags]

No, please don't! I would hate it if I discouraged another writer from writing!

[flippet]

Good gawd, girl! It's so nuanced, so multi-layered. Reading this is like immersing myself in sensation and emotion.

I'm savoring it....moving on slowly to the next part!

[little_zigzags]

Aw, thanks!

And you definitely have more self-control than I do when it comes to fic-reading!

[newyork_noodles]

This is so... *word*... TACTILE. Your attention to detail blows my mind, and it's all so totally West Wing, CJ and Toby playing Scrabble especially, and you've totally captured the utter bleakness of early season six. meh depressing.

I love your writing so much- Josh and Donna, you write their relationship like a state of mind, almost, and it is, simply, amazing.

[kiss_me_cassie]

Oh, thiss was beautiful and heartbreaking and I can't wait to read more.

[fearlessfan]

This was wonderful - you totally captured all of the characters' voices, and I loved the way you wrote Josh and Donna in particular. You got each of their nuances and also captured that lovely, affectionate, frustrated tension between them. Loved it!