As if teaching the young had brought out his eighteen year old self, barely lurking under the surface.
Yeah, I could totally see this. Yum, btw.
She nods, a little lost. He’s still distant from her, a bit cool. He sits in front of her, sipping his coffee, sleek and put-together in his slender peacoat. She recognizes his attitude, its how he acts with all the women that she’d seen coming through his office. Despite his inner ineptness, he’s like that girl in high school who loves to play hard to get.
I can so see this being Josh's reaction.
She groans, thinking of the looks CJ would give her. He’s good, she would say. We caught up. I’ll see him the next time he’s in the Capitol. The prospect makes her chest ache. She breathes out, reaches for her phone. There’s got to be more to this story.
Love this. Go, donna!
She didn’t see it coming. She feels desperate, short of breath. He cups both sides of her face and she doesn’t realize she’s crying even as she smiles until he wipes at her leaky eyes with his thumbs.
Oh, this is nice.
I feel like a broken record, but I really love how you write them... Now what happens? :)
Thank you so much for the great comments. And yes, yum. Maybe I wrote a sort of ridiculous fantasy sexy!Josh of the future, but people seem to like it! Hee.
As if teaching the young had brought out his eighteen year old self, barely lurking under the surface.
Yeah, I could totally see this. Yum, btw.
She nods, a little lost. He’s still distant from her, a bit cool. He sits in front of her, sipping his coffee, sleek and put-together in his slender peacoat. She recognizes his attitude, its how he acts with all the women that she’d seen coming through his office. Despite his inner ineptness, he’s like that girl in high school who loves to play hard to get.
I can so see this being Josh's reaction.
She groans, thinking of the looks CJ would give her. He’s good, she would say. We caught up. I’ll see him the next time he’s in the Capitol. The prospect makes her chest ache.
She breathes out, reaches for her phone. There’s got to be more to this story.
Love this. Go, donna!
She didn’t see it coming. She feels desperate, short of breath. He cups both sides of her face and she doesn’t realize she’s crying even as she smiles until he wipes at her leaky eyes with his thumbs.
Oh, this is nice.
I feel like a broken record, but I really love how you write them...
Now what happens? :)
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btw, I have pimped your fic quite a bit and everyone loves it, but they agree with me...
Ending open-ended. Need sequel. :)
I am shameless.
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