Comments | little_seahorse: arthur/merlin one-shot, [PART ONE] the one where a sneaky foot massage leads to smut

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arthur/merlin one-shot, [PART ONE] the one where a sneaky foot massage leads to smut

Jun 21, 2011 21:23

By: little_seahorse
Title: The one where a sneaky foot-massage leads to smut.
Genre: modern!AU, non magic, fluff
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin, brief Merlin/Will
Rating: NC-17
Word count: around 5,500. Broken in two as it wouldn't fit in one post.
Notes: *waves* Quite new to this fandom. This is my first Arthur/Merlin fic & i'm gifting it to ( Read more... )

genre: fluff, merlin/arthur, rating: nc-17, 1st time posting, slash

Comments 7

brunettepet June 21 2011, 13:49:51 UTC

I love Arthur's awkward crush on his flatmate. Merlin really is lovely in this - kind and open. The description of that portrait was mouth watering.

little_seahorse June 21 2011, 14:02:41 UTC

Fab! So glad you liked it :D I had a lot of fun imagining Merlin-in-a-portrait ^_____^ noms! xx

doompie June 21 2011, 16:06:35 UTC

*added to memories, added to memories*

Right, I suppose I will continue on to part 2 hehe!!

p.s. am loving this, I don't think I have come across shy!Arthur before, but am pleasantly surprised and am loving him!

:D

little_seahorse June 21 2011, 16:15:54 UTC

Wow!! Thankyoooo :DDD

piscaria June 21 2011, 17:22:03 UTC

This is lovely! I enjoyed Arthur's loneliness and his crush on Merlin. And damn, that pastel sounds hot!

bananahater336 June 27 2011, 17:59:30 UTC

It's lonely, but he pushes the sting of it aside, and works harder. I'd make friends with you, Arthur, you love!

Arthur's sick of going for weeks between hearing his phone ring. This would be horrible. I don't know how he could possibly live with it.

Dickheads need not apply. Ohhh, Merlin.

Arthur fights the blush that rises without his permission and loses. Awww!

He didn't laugh a lot, but he had a sly wit, and was cheeky, and he smirked when he made Arthur laugh, which was often. I for some reason love the detail that he doesn't laugh a lot, but is funny anyway.

a line of it dark above the towel wrapped twice round his slim hips. I love that the towel wraps twice around him! Such a skinny fellow!

He'd only just started to toy with the idea in his head, of asking Merlin out. Oh! That's so sad, that he was actually going to act on it and now he can't and - *flutters*

how stupid he'd been to think that someone like Merlin would be unattached. ='(

Arthur never hears Will's name moaned, he doesn't hear Merlin's voice at all. That' ( ... )

little_seahorse June 28 2011, 06:17:34 UTC

Oh!! I adore you for quoting this back at me :D so so pleased you enjoyed it.

I didn't like Merlin teasing Arthur about the night before either (even though i'm responsible for it >__<)

Also, I wanted to pet Arthur for making him sad.

I like that you liked the characterizations - I was a little worried that the boys would come across too generic. *hugs*

Thankyou for taking the time to leave such a detailed comment *squishes*