A Learning Process [20]

[little_passions]

Title: A Learning Process
Beta: atriums
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Humor
Summary: Jung Yunho was supposed to be the mysterious, indifferent, student council president. While he’d never stolen any minute of Kim Jaejoong’s attention before, he certainly was now.

Comments

[tvfxq]

I think I've constantly been voicing out that I didn't want this series to end since chapter 10 :)) Now that the end's finally come, though, I feel kind of... happy? I'm not happy that it's over. No, you know me, and you know how I feel about this series ;; I am happy, though, that it ended how it did. Development is gradually evident from the first chapter onto the last; and that's one of the many things I do like about this story. I do feel, as well, that you've grown with this fic; one can see it in your writing.

Let me just say that the way you plotted this fic as a whole was impeccable. Things didn't happen all too fast - which is nice because it gave things time to develop. Also, I think this was the only high school fic that ended with the characters graduating from high school. That almost never happens; and maybe it does, but I haven't come across any other yet. Allow me to point out something as well - Yunho did end up going to Japan (or at least he's about to) and Jaejoong didn't end up following him or even stopping him and while it's kind of sad, I really liked that. I would have been disappointed if Yunho gave up going to Japan just because of Jaejoong or if Jaejoong ended up studying in Japan as well just because of Yunho. That they ended up having to separate is a realistic ending (though I know that it really just is the beginning of something new for them in; in this universe, at least). To be honest, I prefer things realistic (I know I have some pretty unrealistic fics I've written but pls. I wrote them in my neneng days. I like different things now :)) ), and the only time I'm all right with unrealistic stories if it really is meant to be out of the norm. I don't like reading a story about everyday life with not-so-everyday happenings going on because it doesn't feel relatable. (This is why I don't read M-Preg e__e or fics wherein Yunho and Jaejoong get married like it's a normal thing because, um, hello? This is South Korea we're talking about. There ain't no same sex marriages going on D: anyway, I digress. I'm starting to rant; sorry). I love that this story was more or less realistic from start to finish (though, yes, there are some things that don't happen everyday, but I'm willing to let them slide because they're not totally and glaringly unacceptable; and it allowed this story to move more smoothly). Also, I don't know if I commented on this before, but remember when they had prom? And Yunho won prom king while Go Ara won prom queen? In retrospect, I'm actually quite glad that happened. Because, ugh, I've read fics wherein Jaejoong won prom queen and I'm so glad that you have a sensible head on your shoulders because uugh one more fic like that and I'm going to slap a bitch e___e Anyway, sorry. Ranting and getting off topic again.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that I really enjoyed this from start to finish. It made me feel such different things, you know? It's very entertaining and there's nothing flashy or exaggerated about it. It's simple. There aren't any major plot twists, but I like that. I really do. I mean imagine how this story would have turned out if, I don't know, we found out Jaejoong got pregnant or something or some seedy underground men started going after Yunho's family because they're apparently motherfucking rich. Or, you know, something like that. Okay, to be honest, I don't know where this comment is going because it's very unorganized, but you know what, whatever. FEELS DON'T ALWAYS HAVE TO MAKE SENSE ;A;

Sigh. You know, when I read your author's note, I almost got scared that you were going to stop writing or something because it seems so much like a farewell note somehow ;~; but then I remembered our conversations the other day and I remember me bugging (sort of) you about the cude fic and then I felt reassured ^__^

[tvfxq]

Oh god. It was a liiiiiiittle bit too long .___. anyway, here's the rest of the comment:

So, yeah. Thanks for pouring hours and hours into writing this story. Thanks for coming up with it in the first place and for having the will to keep it going until the end. Thanks for keeping all of us entertained with this story and for being such a great author ♥ I legit think that the Yunjae fandom is lucky to have someone like you who is level-headed and writes so well ;u;

(and yes, I do have a big heart :3 haha, I'm kidding :)) )

I love you soulmateu ♥