For You [1/?]

[little_passions]

Title: For You
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst
Summary: His life turned around the moment he met Yunho.

Comments

[ouji]

ME FIRST :D

[ouji]

lol if you didn't mention about this story moving at a slow pace i would have thought it was more on the dull side. Thought, you're right, it is pretty slow o_o! the way you describe the occupation of an architect sounds much more complicated when jaejoong is working in that field =~=;; but nonetheless, it's a good hint on the complications between each of their lives :D

Also, i see jaejoong's character is much more shy, which is another contribution to the slow process! haha, sorry if i'm trying to analyze too much but this preview is already killing me! (in a good way) and i somehow want to see how this story progresses :) good thing you have more written in advance and i can't wait to see the rest^^

[little_passions]

Congratulations on being first! XD

I make architecture sound complicated? Hahaha. I'm sorry. XD I don't know the first thing about it tbh, so I won't be going in depth on it, don't worry. XD

I'm glad you made a comment about the pacing of this fic, so that I can improve on it in the next chapter. It's a bit of a slow start, but I'll be sure to include better Yunjae interaction and more information as to why YooSuMin are so protective over Jaejoong and why Jaejoong's so distressed. Also, don't worry about the analyzing - it's all appreciated, and any suggestion on the pacing would be welcome as well. ^____^

Thank you for the comment, and I hope you enjoy the next chapters more. <3

[ouji]

hehe it's been a long time since i've been first xD thank you.

it could just be jaejoong's stress/agitations that makes his work sound so hard xD No need to apologize on that. It's just my own thoughts lol

Glad to be helpful. :) well i think a slower pace works better for the lives of adults(haha some reason) and if they were anywhere younger, the speed would be faster, no? xD it looks like a reasonable start and i think you succeeded in initiating that! >:D

[mitsui_tsuru]

sounds interesting ^___^
i love yun here, jae shouldn't snapped at him though.. but at least yun didn't seem to mad :D

cant wait for next chapter :)

[little_passions]

I'm glad you thought this was interesting. Jaejoong should not have snapped at Yunho, but in an explanation for his behavior, he's in a sort of stressed/sensitive state of mind in this chapter and he's sick of being watched so carefully too, so it made him act rudely.

I hope you like the next chapter, and thank you for the comment!

[pawshingo]

Jaejoong sounds so stressed and uncertain. snapping at friends is not a good sign. Yunho save him!

[little_passions]

Jaejoong's going through a lot in this story, and he'll definitely need Yunho more in the future. As for the reasons for Jaejoong's stress and uncertainty...it'll be unveiled in the coming chapters. XD

Thank you for the comment!

[aoktoga]

I sense that Changmin is also interested to Yunho...I don't know cause I feel some jealousy feelings around him, when Yunho wanted to drive Jaejoong back.
Waiting for the next update about them. Thank you

[little_passions]

Underlying jealousy? Maybe. XD Hahaha. You'll just have to find out later on in the story. Thank you for taking the time to read and for leaving a comment!

[yufen18]

*hands up. I want ask jaechunsumin isn't student in this story rite

[little_passions]

No, they're not. Jaejoong's an architect, and YooSuMin's jobs will be mentioned later on in the story. Everyone's an adult here. ^___^