The New Forever

[little_grey_owl]

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[bluegerl]

Oh dear very dear me. HOw sad... and it's awful in hindsight. Oh dear me. I do so understand. Poor Lou and Morgan. Oh dear. Oh dear......

PS there's a tiny typo fourth word foRever cos don't want to spoil it!

[little_grey_owl]

Too bad they only realised it in hindsight... I'd go mad in their situation.

Oops, thanks for catching that! I fixed it.

Wow

[cedarwolfsinger]

This is absolutely chilling. I love my husband and we're coming up on 23 years of marriage. If I could never separate from him -- I'd kill one or both of us... Well done.

Re: Wow

[little_grey_owl]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

I think being tied together like that without the chance of occasionally having some space for oneself would make most people consider murder. I certainly would as well.

[hwango]

I like that we get an immediate sense of foreboding from the very first paragraph.

And then, eek, what a horrible thought! I do feel bad for the pair of them. They really didn't think it through very well, or they'd realize what they were in for.

[little_grey_owl]

Thank you!

They did go into the whole thing without thinking it through completely and bitterly regretted their naivety, I'm afraid.