Untitled, WIP

Nov 13, 2008 12:09

A rough work in progress. Constructive criticism welcomed and requested.

I'm down on my knees again
Waiting, breaking
Taking everything I want and nothing I need

Every breath is like fire
Burning, churning, tearing me apart
The stakes are high, the losses overwhelm me

Gripped too tightly to reality
I'm losing my imagination
My inspiration left through the back door

It's not what you see, It's not what you think
I'm just falling apart inside again
Trying not to crack the mask I wear

verse, assistance required, original, wip

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